| Title: Chapter 3: Chasing Tomorrow
| 24 May 2011 8:36 pm
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| Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed)
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| Title: Chapter 3: Chasing Tomorrow
| 23 May 2011 11:06 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely chapter I like the confrontation between Severus and Dumbledore great writing thank you
| Title: Chapter 3: Chasing Tomorrow
| 23 May 2011 2:31 am
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| Reviewer: waitingforeternity (Anonymous)
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Well done, so far. I have to admit to liking the detail of your writing. It is not too dense, nor too light, and the dialogue fits in nicely (which can be rather hard to do). There is still a certain...ambivalence...about Harry's treatment--as it is obviously abuse, but we do not know how severe. I commend you on your work so far, and hope to read more soon.
-waitingforeternity
| Title: Chapter 3: Chasing Tomorrow
| 22 May 2011 10:46 pm
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| Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed)
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Can't wait for the next chapter, although to me Roan House sounds like a facility of some sort...
| Title: Chapter 3: Chasing Tomorrow
| 22 May 2011 7:44 pm
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| Reviewer: lilac22 (Anonymous)
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this is awesome. keep it up! can't wait to read the next chapter :)
| Title: Chapter 3: Chasing Tomorrow
| 22 May 2011 7:40 pm
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| Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous)
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Your dialogue is particularly good.
Awesome chapter. Update soon
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