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Title: Chapter 3: Chasing Tomorrow 22 May 2011 7:44 pm
Reviewer: lilac22 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    this is awesome. keep it up! can't wait to read the next chapter :)
Title: Chapter 3: Chasing Tomorrow 22 May 2011 7:40 pm
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Your dialogue is particularly good.
Title: Chapter 3: Chasing Tomorrow 22 May 2011 3:48 pm
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter. Update soon
Title: Chapter 2: What She Died For 20 May 2011 5:09 am
Reviewer: chrmisha (Signed) [Report This]
    Love this! The only discrepancy is Snape performing magic since it would register as underage magic at that residence. Can't wait to read more!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for the compliment! As to the discrepency though (and for the sake of pre-explanation in regards to the soon coming chapter two):

    Although underage magic is recorded at the Dursley residence, the magic of adults is inconsistently registered - I say inconsistently, because while Dobby was registered, several adult wizards were not. The Ministry tracks the use of magic through the Trace Charm, which cannot be placed on an adult. And although the charm is described as affecting the 'vicinity' of where an underage witch or wizard may reside, it is heavily supported in the books that adult witches and wizards can perform magic around an underage child without it alerting the Ministry. The Ministry generally ignores when the Trace is broken by underage wizards and witches of wizarding families, expecting their parents to discipline them, and living in a magical household essentially makes it useless at monitoring their use of magic; Harry, living at the Dursley's, would be given more attention, but it was stated Hermione has cast spells at home while underage without being reprimanded by the Ministry. So there are discrepencies in the books themselves. Also, in the books Tonks and Arthur Weasley both cast spells in Harry's home without the Ministry becoming involved. It is also theorized that the Ministry recognizes a discrepency between adult casting and underage casting; that said, considering Severus' history I don't doubt for a second he knows many ways to shield his presense from the notice of the Ministry even IF they were to be paying attention. And considering he's a man who flies under the law rather often, I imagine he's quite good at keeping off the radar.

Title: Chapter 2: What She Died For 19 May 2011 4:13 am
Reviewer: DestinedMommy (Signed) [Report This]
    ohh this is really really good! i really enjoyed it the characters seemed very real once again ur paragraphs were shorter but try breaking them up just a little more but overall i really enjoyed it n im looking 4ward to the nxt chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you; I shall keep that in mind.
Title: Chapter 1: Too Much 19 May 2011 4:01 am
Reviewer: DestinedMommy (Signed) [Report This]
    i really liked it but i think u shld break up ur paragraphs more so that its easier to read otherwise some pple mite not even read the whole thing cuz big paragraphs like this kinda interfere w/ reading
    but gr8 job!
Title: Chapter 2: What She Died For 18 May 2011 11:35 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great start thank you a good take on an old idea

    Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Title: Chapter 2: What She Died For 18 May 2011 2:39 am
Reviewer: LegolasAnimeLuver (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooohthis is getting very good! Please update soon-I would love to know what happens next!

    Author's Response: Chapter two is scheduled to come out on Sunday - thank  you very much for the compliments!
Title: Chapter 2: What She Died For 18 May 2011 2:39 am
Reviewer: LegolasAnimeLuver (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooohthis is getting very good! Please update soon-I would love to know what happens next!
Title: Chapter 2: What She Died For 18 May 2011 1:48 am
Reviewer: Kayla Anne (Signed) [Report This]
    I keep trying to come up with some constructive criticism, but I just can't think of anything at this point. So, GO YOU! More please. Pretty please.

    Author's Response:

    Haha, wonderful! Its always good to know things are going well in the beginning. hopefully it stays that way!

     

    Chapter two is scheduled for release on Sunday - maybe sooner if I have time.


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