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Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: The Sorting 11 Nov 2016 10:03 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved the start lots of questions and angst
Title: The Sorting 15 Aug 2012 2:26 pm
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    A brilliant start.
Title: The Sorting 30 May 2011 12:17 am
Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed) [Report This]
    Loveing this so far I am a huge fan of the idea of a slytherin Harry i think it brings a tottally different tone to a story.

    Can't wait to read more

    Author's Response: Yes, I have to admit I find Slytherin to be the most interesting of the four Hogwarts Houses... more will be up soon, thank you for the feedback!
Title: The Sorting 29 May 2011 8:17 pm
Reviewer: Dyrim (Signed) [Report This]
    So far I'm very excited for this story :) I look forward to seeing how you develop Harry as a Slytherin firstie :p

    Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it so far!
Title: The Sorting 29 May 2011 6:45 pm
Reviewer: Doewke (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow, really nice start! Lovely portrait of Harry! I am curious how he experiences everything around him! But more importantly I'm dying to know what Harry's life story is up until now...

    Author's Response: Thank you! We'll learn more of Harry's life story in later chapters. Thanks for the feedback!
Title: The Sorting 29 May 2011 1:34 pm
Reviewer: Marion (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ohh, well done! This is the first fic of its kind (Slytherin!Harry) which I've read with such enjoyment!

    I like Snape's thought processes; he is neither villyfied by the author (MeanBully!Snape) nor turned into DreamDaddy!Snape, or even worse, in a combination of the two (Mean Bully Snape Who Is Totally Prejudiced And Mean To Poor Angelic Harrykins But Finds Out He Has Been Wrong All This Time, Apologises And Becomes Dream Daddy Snape is my ulitmate pet peeve, since I happen to think that Canon!Snape isn't a mean bully nor do I fin Canon!Harry angelic).

    This Snape is a good Housefather to his Slytherins, observant and a keen judge of character and, unlike any other (canon) teacher, NOT so preoccupied with the bloody Boy Who Lived that he ignores the other students.

    Bravo!

    Author's Response: Thank you for the feedback! I'm glad you liked my Snape; I find it's always a fine balance between his admittedly negative outlook on the world and the fact that he does take his responsibilities seriously. If I managed to get that across, I'm glad. Thanks again!
Title: The Sorting 29 May 2011 1:31 pm
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really love the story so far and I would love to read more.. I would like to see the interaction between Snape and Harry

    Author's Response: Thank you! More Snape and Harry will be coming up soon...
Title: The Sorting 29 May 2011 7:21 am
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed) [Report This]
    So good. It's a really in-character depiction so far, which I like, and I like your descriptions of everyone too. Sometimes I skim over long conversation or long descriptions to get to the point, but not in your story. Everything is balanced just right here! Keep it up and looking forward to more!

    Author's Response: Thank you, I really appreciate what you said about my writing! Thank you very much for reviewing; more should be coming soon...
Title: The Sorting 29 May 2011 6:55 am
Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I usually like Slytherin Harry fics, so I am looking forward to where you take this. I like that you put Hermione in Ravenclaw; will she and Harry become friends? Aren't there an even number of prefects--boy and girl for each House in each year for the 5th through 7th years?

    Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, I think you're right, I should probably change it into three boys and three girls (I expect Snape will be glad for even more female help ;)! ). As for Hermione, she'll definitely play a part in the chapters to come. Thanks for the feedback!
Title: The Sorting 29 May 2011 6:13 am
Reviewer: Helene (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome beginning! You've hooked me and I want to see where you take this next. I love Snape's introduction speech especially.

    Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you're hooked! Next chapter should be up soon!

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