| Title: Essays
| 11 Nov 2016 10:23 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very insightful thank you
| Title: Essays
| 03 Oct 2014 6:09 pm
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| Reviewer: Steph. (Anonymous)
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Hey,
This is really a lovely story, and I enjoyed the whole thing, but what really haunted me was Harry's essay in this chapter. I adored this chapter--of course while I read it, I was dying to know what Harry wrote, but you managed to make all the little peeks into the lives of the other Slytherins terribly interesting as well. And Harry's essay just destroyed me. He revealed everything there, but in a way that Snape didn't understand. Man. Especially when compared with the other essays--it was crushing. I might have teared up.
Anyway, very nicely done!
LOL "i want to eat in the great hall every day"
Loving this, just off to read more! :)
Again, well done and I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!
| Title: Essays
| 31 May 2011 6:59 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved the essays you caught the children so well but I'm confused about Blaize is he a girl in this story?
Author's Response: I think I created some confusion by not placing Blaise in Harry's dorm, lol! Blaise is actually his canon (male) self; it's just that I had this idea that there were several dorms for the first-year boys - which I'm beginning to think is not what everybody else thinks! Anyway, thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you liked the essays!
| Title: Essays
| 31 May 2011 5:54 pm
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| Reviewer: tommy's girl78 (Anonymous)
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i like this stories so far hope you update very very soon
Author's Response: Just got a bit of final editing to do, so I should be updating some time tomorrow... thank you for letting me know what you think!
Brilliant! Can't wait for more! xx
Author's Response: More will be up soon! Thanks for reviewing!
wow well done love that you got the personality of each child so well and Harry's essay yeah defintly more questions than answers poor Severus. Can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: Yes, Snape has his work cut out for him... thank you very much for sharing your thoughts!
| Title: Essays
| 31 May 2011 7:58 am
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| Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous)
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Liked the highly characteristic essays.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed them!
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