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Reviews For Through a Glass, Darkly
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad I managed to get the sense of trust between Snape and Harry across; they're both not the type to speak openly about their feelings.
i hope u update soon! Author's Response: Thank you! The new chapter should be up today :)!
Author's Response: Thank you! As for the use of Latin, I always wondered why Hogwarts didn't teach any foreign languages - they could teach languages traditionally associated with witchcraft, like Latin, Greek or maybe Egyptian. So I thought that maybe Latin was taught at some point, and the older generation still remembers it. I'm glad you liked that little detail! Thank you for reviewing!
love the use of latin Severus is defintly in for a difficult convosation with Dmbles that is for sure Author's Response: Yes, Harry and Severus probably have a similar outlook on the world, i.e., a distrustful one. Thank you for reviewing, I'm glad you're enjoying the story!
In a few places I think you should work on your phrasing, as the story seems to lose its flow. Maybe reread it another time, and don't be afraid to make changes? Keep it up =] Author's Response: Thank you! And thanks for the heads-up on the phrasing, I'll try to improve that. It would be great if you could let me know what lines/passages you were referring to exactly; I don't have a beta for this story, so any advice is much appreciated. Thanks again!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like Snape and Draco; yes, Harry's lucky to have them. Thank you for reviewing!
Now, I just have to wonder, how much of that "torture" (for that is what happened!) was brought on by whatever is inhabiting that scar of his. Did it taunt the Dursley's until they snapped? Or are the muggles just "that" evil? Great chapter! Thanks for the update! V. Author's Response: Hmmm, I can't really answer without giving spoilers... but there'll be more about Harry's home life in the upcoming chapters! Thank you for sharing your thoughts!
Author's Response: Next one will be longer, I promise! Thank you for reviewing!
Author's Response: Yes, somehow she and Severus seem to be on the same wavelength... they're both quite down-to-earth, and deeply concerned for the students. I'm glad I managed to get that across! Thank you for reviewing! |
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