Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Scars 15 Aug 2012 3:02 pm
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    I love how you show Snape's softer side within his snarkiness. Always such beautiful characterisation.
Title: Scars 10 Jun 2011 7:19 am
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like the rapport between Snape and Harry. Nothing spoken, but a strong sense of trust.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad I managed to get the sense of trust between Snape and Harry across; they're both not the type to speak openly about their feelings.
Title: Scars 09 Jun 2011 11:41 pm
Reviewer: DestinedMommy (Signed) [Report This]
    oh poor harry!
    i hope u update soon!

    Author's Response: Thank you! The new chapter should be up today :)!
Title: Scars 09 Jun 2011 10:45 pm
Reviewer: Inu Chan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Loving it, especially having the teachers speak Latin in front of the kids. Can't believe nobody else has done that. Write more soon.

    Author's Response: Thank you! As for the use of Latin, I always wondered why Hogwarts didn't teach any foreign languages - they could teach languages traditionally associated with witchcraft, like Latin, Greek or maybe Egyptian. So I thought that maybe Latin was taught at some point, and the older generation still remembers it. I'm glad you liked that little detail! Thank you for reviewing!
Title: Scars 09 Jun 2011 3:57 pm
Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed) [Report This]
    wow that was amazing and i agree with Poppy there is defintly some sort of rapport between Severus and Harry. perhaps Harrysees a bit of a kindred spirit!!!
    love the use of latin
    Severus is defintly in for a difficult convosation with Dmbles that is for sure

    Author's Response: Yes, Harry and Severus probably have a similar outlook on the world, i.e., a distrustful one. Thank you for reviewing, I'm glad you're enjoying the story!
Title: Scars 09 Jun 2011 2:13 pm
Reviewer: alwaysmaddi (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a really enjoyable read, it is easy to follow, without being too predictable. It is intriguing and makes me want to keep reading. =]

    In a few places I think you should work on your phrasing, as the story seems to lose its flow. Maybe reread it another time, and don't be afraid to make changes?

    Keep it up =]

    Author's Response: Thank you! And thanks for the heads-up on the phrasing, I'll try to improve that. It would be great if you could let me know what lines/passages you were referring to exactly; I don't have a beta for this story, so any advice is much appreciated. Thanks again!
Title: Scars 09 Jun 2011 3:47 am
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow! I loved the story! I mean, it's dark and sad, but I loved how Snape is in this story and how Draco is also. I hope they will support Harry and grow into a trusting companionship.

    Author's Response: I'm glad you like Snape and Draco; yes, Harry's lucky to have them. Thank you for reviewing!
Title: Scars 09 Jun 2011 2:55 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry!

    Now, I just have to wonder, how much of that "torture" (for that is what happened!) was brought on by whatever is inhabiting that scar of his. Did it taunt the Dursley's until they snapped? Or are the muggles just "that" evil?

    Great chapter! Thanks for the update!
    V.

    Author's Response: Hmmm, I can't really answer without giving spoilers... but there'll be more about Harry's home life in the upcoming chapters! Thank you for sharing your thoughts!
Title: Scars 09 Jun 2011 2:14 am
Reviewer: LegolasAnimeLuver (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh this is getting good. It was a rather short chapter though.

    Author's Response: Next one will be longer, I promise! Thank you for reviewing!
Title: Scars 09 Jun 2011 12:06 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Liked your Pomfrey and the rapport she and Severus have thank you

    Author's Response: Yes, somehow she and Severus seem to be on the same wavelength... they're both quite down-to-earth, and deeply concerned for the students. I'm glad I managed to get that across! Thank you for reviewing!

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