Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Enemy 15 Aug 2012 3:18 pm
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    Good grief!
Title: Enemy 15 Jun 2011 2:24 am
Reviewer: LegolasAnimeLuver (Signed) [Report This]
    WONDERFUL! However, the story would do well without the "Snots", it is just too disgusting to read. It would be great if you could take them out.

    Author's Response: Sorry about that! Kids *can* be disgusting though; I've worked with young children, and let's just say that snot was not the worst of it ;). Anyway, thanks for reviewing!
Title: Enemy 14 Jun 2011 5:34 pm
Reviewer: TerkaJ (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Usually I'm too lazy to write a review. In fact, I write it so rarely it's smameful, considering how many fictions I've read and considered good. But I'm writing one now - I really like your story. And I love the way you're telling it. Now go on and write another chapter, hurry!

    Author's Response: I know what you mean - I don't always leave a review either, particularly when I read a story that's been completed for a while (even though I know the writer would probably appreciate the feedback all the same). I'm glad you took the time to let me know you're enjoying the story! Next chapter will be up soon :)!
Title: Enemy 14 Jun 2011 5:12 pm
Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed) [Report This]
    wow that was powerful
    giveing you more chocolate

    Author's Response: Mmm, more chocolate :)! Thank you!
Title: Enemy 14 Jun 2011 4:19 pm
Reviewer: Sinistra I. (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is a really interesting story. I like your idea with the possession, it is in a way I have not read before. Hermione in Rawenclaw but being Draco's and Harry's friend was unexpected, nonetheless it opens a very unussual part for the future. I await the next chapter hopeful and know even now that it will be good.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! That's one of the reasons why I put Hermione in Ravenclaw; I believe the rivalry between Ravenclaw and Slytherin might not be as fierce as the one between Gryffindor and Slytherin, so it might be easier for a Raven to befriend a Snake.

     Thank you for sharing your thoughts - the next chapter should be up soon!

Title: Enemy 14 Jun 2011 3:52 pm
Reviewer: orpheneritus (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, exciting. I did think maybe the Dursleys had tried an exorcism or something like that. Catholicism isn't so popular in England, but desperate times... that would be fairly traumatising. Poor Harry I hope he can return to his friends soon, if only for a little while.

    Author's Response: I'd LOVE to give a detailed answer, but that would mean giving major spoilers... but I think it's safe to say that Harry has a lot of trauma to work through. Thank you for reviewing!
Title: Enemy 14 Jun 2011 1:26 pm
Reviewer: silvermoonfae (Signed) [Report This]
    I give u my last Rolo (quite an honour) ;) great chapter, definitely the unexpected. Can't wait to see how the next one develops :)

    Author's Response: Your last Rolo - thank you :)!! I'm glad you liked the chapter, thank you for letting me know.
Title: Enemy 14 Jun 2011 7:37 am
Reviewer: Gretchen (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Snape got roped into fixing everything, I see.

    This is really shaping up to be a great story, with the creepiness and suspense lightened up by a lot of good character-building.

    Author's Response: Yes, Snape does get landed with picking up the pieces, doesn't he? Thank you so much for the kind feedback, I'm glad you're enjoying the story!
Title: Enemy 14 Jun 2011 3:56 am
Reviewer: DestinedMommy (Signed) [Report This]
    this is so sad poor poor Harry plz don't make Harry suffer nymore :(
    i really hope Severus helps Harry soon! update asap!

    Author's Response: Poor Harry, we do like to give him a hard time, don't we? New chapter will be up soon!
Title: Enemy 14 Jun 2011 2:52 am
Reviewer: Mana (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ooh, this was an awesome chapter. Amazing job; very chilling. I love the way you write the characters, Snape and Harry especially. You keep them very close in character for this unusually and disturbing situation. I can't wait for more!

    Author's Response: I'm glad you think Snape and Harry are mostly IC; it's sometimes hard to tell when re-reading my own story. Thank you for reviewing!

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