Potions and Snitches
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Title: Arrangements 15 Aug 2012 3:38 pm
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    A perfect end to the chapter.
Title: Arrangements 16 Jul 2011 11:20 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    well, i certainly feel better now! great chapter!

    Author's Response: I'm glad you do, and thank you!
Title: Arrangements 23 Jun 2011 2:09 am
Reviewer: LaPapillonne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Thank you for the new chapters! I hope to see more in the future ;]

    Also, I hope that we continue to see Harry struggling to adjust for some time. I hate seeing fics where everything is solved in a few months time. Or even a year. Those kinds of things leave more than just physical marks.

    Happy Writing,
    Adrienne

    Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! You're very right about traumatic experiences lasting longer than a few months, and I hope I'll manage to show that Harry has not suddenly transformed into a perfectly happy child at Hogwarts. Thanks for the feedback!
Title: Arrangements 23 Jun 2011 12:27 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Love Ravenclaw hermione and the chocolate game was inspired thank you

    Author's Response: I'm glad you like Hermione - I think she's on her way to becoming a teacher... thank you for reviewing!
Title: Arrangements 21 Jun 2011 9:28 pm
Reviewer: Gretchen (Anonymous) [Report This]
    So happy to come back not to one, but two chapters! I love protective Snape, and Draco and Hermione's budding friendship. And the last chapter was seriously like a horror movie, I swear I could hear the ominous music in the background.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked the last two chapters - I tried to put a dark note into "Exorcism", so I'm glad I managed to get that across. Stay tuned for more Draco and Hermione in the upcoming chapters :)! Thank you for reviewing!
Title: Arrangements 21 Jun 2011 5:27 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I love how you are pacing the development of the relationships.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm very glad you like the pacing of the story - it's usually one of my weak points in writing. Thank you very much!
Title: Arrangements 21 Jun 2011 3:06 pm
Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed) [Report This]
    love the slytherin side of Harry :) he can manipulate that is for sure

    and Severus is actually slowly letting his guard down which is even nicer.

    Author's Response: I'm glad you like Snake!Harry - he's fun to write! And I'm glad you like Snape's development (although he's in for a test in the upcoming chapters...). Thank you for reviewing!
Title: Arrangements 21 Jun 2011 10:26 am
Reviewer: orpheneritus (Signed) [Report This]
    I love Snape's last line. It's so true; kids aren't subtle at all! I'm glad to have Hermione and Draco back in the scenes and keen to find out how Snape and Dumbledore will decide to deal with their unwelcome visitor.

    Author's Response: No, not even Slytherin kids ;)! I'm glad you like Hermione and Draco; I love writing them. Thank you for reviewing!
Title: Arrangements 21 Jun 2011 6:09 am
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Just a thought... for Harry, hiding and hording food makes perfect sense. I don't see any reason to convince him otherwise. Why not just go along, matter-of-factly make sure he can horde as much as he pleases and support the endeavor to the extent that he finally begins to see it's unnecessary. After all, it doesn't make sense to stop unless he *knows* he doesn't need to keep it.

    As for hugs, maybe Snape will be able to give those as well someday and learn that it's not an "either/or" proposition. He can give a hug and still give security and concrete help.

    Author's Response:

    You're right on both accounts - Snape has a lot to learn. As for the food hiding, I think it's because Snape is a very rational person who is used to reasoning things out. He'll come to understand in time that sometimes, other channels of communication work better.

     Thank you for sharing your thoughts!

Title: Arrangements 21 Jun 2011 4:01 am
Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I loved the interaction between Harry, Hermione, and Draco and Harry's concern for Severus if Voldemort returns. I can't wait to see the trip to Hogsmeade!

    Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, Snape had better take Harry to Hogsmeade soon, or Harry'll have to resort to Slytherin tactics ;)... thank you for sharing your thoughts!

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