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Reviews For Through a Glass, Darkly
It's all in the detail - that's what I love about your world.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked Snape's memories of Lily - I didn't want to go into his feelings for her too deeply (that would be another story, I guess), but I'm glad I managed to get some of them across! Thank you for reviewing!
It's really great how you have made something unique from the usual fanfic plot components. You have added a layer of reality that is much appreciated -- the Dursley's conflicted actions, Harry's reluctance to trust, Snape's self-analysis, and so on. I really look forward to the update. I'm thinking there is going to be some kind of V. vs. S. smack-down in the Forbidden Forest! Only your update will tell me if I am right. :) Author's Response: Thank you very much for the kind feedback! I'm so glad you find the story to be realistic; I've tried really hard to make it so, and to take Harry's and Snape's backgrounds and experiences into consideration. If some of that came across, I'm really happy! As for your theory, well, yes and no... but it's a good guess :) (trying hard to be vague here!). Thank you for reviewing!
Author's Response: I think Severus will ascribe Harry's Gryffindor moments to the fact that he's Lily's son, and Lily was a Gryffindor. I think in this universe, he sees a lot of his childhood friend in Harry, and very little of James Potter. Thank you very much for reviewing!
Author's Response: I think it was just a scratch. Still, Snape could have healed him, but he was probably too distracted by Peaseblossom and Harry's reaction. Poor Fang! But there's always Hagrid's umbrella when he gets back home :). Thank you for reviewing!
And he's gone. I doubt he wandered anywhere, so was it a spitefilled fairy, or some other creature of the dark wood, or did old snakeface rear his white eyes and sprit the boy off. Snape had best NOT have a heart-attack right now and get moving! Thanks for the update v Author's Response: Yep, Snape had better get his act together! Harry'll need all the help he can get... thank you for reviewing!
BTW I love the exchanges, and 'no greed' motto. Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked the chapter! Thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: I hope so :)! Thank you for reviewing, and have a great vacation! |
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