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Reviews For Through a Glass, Darkly
Author's Response: Hmmm.... yes... and no... new chapter's up :)!
Anxiously waiting for more :) Author's Response: I'm glad I managed to surprise you! Thank you for reviewing!
Author's Response: Thank you - and the new chapter is up :)!
I felt that the chapter was paced way too quickly, and it took me 3 reads to understand what had happened. Also, I did not feel the Avada was at all in character for Dumbledore, at least not without sufficient set-up. I did like how you began to write Snape's (and McGonagall and Flitwick's) emotion at the end, but it could have been expanded on and fleshed out much better in my opinion. Author's Response: Thank you for the concrit, I'll look into that! I'll have to disagree about Dumbledore, though - he proved in Deathly Hallows that he was prepared to do anything to ensure Voldemort's downfall - he accepted the death of his protégé and the fact that Snape would have to live with another murder on his conscience. So yes, I think he would kill to prevent Voldemort rising again. Anyway, thank you for reviewing, and I hope you like the new chapter better!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the chapter. I tried to work with as many elements from canon as I could, and I'm glad it seems to have worked! Thank you very much for reviewing!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!
This chapter was so moving! Oh god, Snape at the end... god, I don't know. *needs an update* Author's Response: Sorry for making you cry... and yet I'm very flattered that you're enjoying the story so much! Thank you for reviewing!
It's so intense when Voldemort possesses Harry...But Harry has already survived the killing curse! He will again right? :/ This is very well written. I can't wait for more! Author's Response: Thank you very much! And no, Harry didn't survive...but... well, I'd better not spoil you :)!
Author's Response: Sorry... cliffhanger-addicted author here ;)...
Author's Response: All shall be revealed in the next chapter - which is up! Thank you for reviewing! |
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