Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Through the Trapdoor 06 Jul 2011 1:49 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    WOW! You killed him? Really??

    Author's Response: Hmmm.... yes... and no... new chapter's up :)!
Title: Through the Trapdoor 05 Jul 2011 11:57 pm
Reviewer: Terri B. (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wooooah. UNexpected. I've really, really enjoyed this story so far and I hope that it's not over yet -- please, please, I hope Harry's still alive!!
    Anxiously waiting for more :)

    Author's Response: I'm glad I managed to surprise you! Thank you for reviewing!
Title: Through the Trapdoor 05 Jul 2011 6:57 pm
Reviewer: Wandacarla (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow! Amazing story!!I hope Harry isnt dead! Please update as soon as possible, I dont think I can stand the wait (:

    Author's Response: Thank you - and the new chapter is up :)!
Title: Through the Trapdoor 05 Jul 2011 5:28 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope you update soon, as I am interested to see exactly where you're going with this.

    I felt that the chapter was paced way too quickly, and it took me 3 reads to understand what had happened.

    Also, I did not feel the Avada was at all in character for Dumbledore, at least not without sufficient set-up.

    I did like how you began to write Snape's (and McGonagall and Flitwick's) emotion at the end, but it could have been expanded on and fleshed out much better in my opinion.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for the concrit, I'll look into that! I'll have to disagree about Dumbledore, though - he proved in Deathly Hallows that he was prepared to do anything to ensure Voldemort's downfall - he accepted the death of his protégé and the fact that Snape would have to live with another murder on his conscience. So yes, I think he would kill to prevent Voldemort rising again.

    Anyway, thank you for reviewing, and I hope you like the new chapter better!

Title: Through the Trapdoor 05 Jul 2011 2:25 pm
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very well written chapter. You fit it together with canon quite well. That is, everything takes a different turn of events, but it is still within the "rules" of how things were set up in canon. Snape's feelings and reactions are very moving.

    Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the chapter. I tried to work with as many elements from canon as I could, and I'm glad it seems to have worked! Thank you very much for reviewing!
Title: Through the Trapdoor 05 Jul 2011 1:44 pm
Reviewer: Frostbluete (Signed) [Report This]
    Don't have much time right now but, wow, what a chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!
Title: Through the Trapdoor 05 Jul 2011 11:40 am
Reviewer: ariablu (Signed) [Report This]
    Don't make me cry again, please.
    This chapter was so moving! Oh god, Snape at the end... god, I don't know.
    *needs an update*

    Author's Response: Sorry for making you cry... and yet I'm very flattered that you're enjoying the story so much! Thank you for reviewing!
Title: Through the Trapdoor 05 Jul 2011 7:35 am
Reviewer: Caesara (Signed) [Report This]
    OOH this is so good!
    It's so intense when Voldemort possesses Harry...But Harry has already survived the killing curse!
    He will again right? :/
    This is very well written. I can't wait for more!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much! And no, Harry didn't survive...but... well, I'd better not spoil you :)!
Title: Through the Trapdoor 05 Jul 2011 6:01 am
Reviewer: DNH (Signed) [Report This]
    What a place to end!!!

    Author's Response: Sorry... cliffhanger-addicted author here ;)...
Title: Through the Trapdoor 05 Jul 2011 5:57 am
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    please don't tell me Harry is dead. please tell me that the AK killed voldemort's horcrux in Harry and he is now truly free!

    Author's Response: All shall be revealed in the next chapter - which is up! Thank you for reviewing!

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