| Title: The Child Under The Tree
| 07 Jul 2011 12:15 am
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| Reviewer: Poirot (Signed)
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I loved the visual references in this chapter, and the pacing was just right!
I wish you had shared a little more of merope's thoughts, though, but you can't have everything. :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked this one better! I agree about Merope; she would have been an interesting character to explore, but as the chapter was from Harry's POV, I couldn't explore her thoughts and feelings in more detail. Thank you for reviewing!
Love it! Beautiful chapter! If I had any fresh and tasty tomatoes you'd get them^^
Author's Response: Mmmh, I'd make myself a nice tomato salad :)! Thank you very much!
| Title: The Child Under The Tree
| 06 Jul 2011 10:23 pm
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| Reviewer: Helene (Anonymous)
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Good Job with it.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you think so!
Oh, this so makes up for the cliffee. Nice to see that Tom goes to his mom and Harry will come back to Sev. Thank you.
Author's Response: I'm glad everyone's so forgiving about the cliffie (I know it was a bad one)! Thank you very much for reviewing!
| Title: The Child Under The Tree
| 06 Jul 2011 9:28 pm
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| Reviewer: RosieLB (Signed)
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Sigh. Beautiful. :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
| Title: The Child Under The Tree
| 06 Jul 2011 9:13 pm
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| Reviewer: b.nolea (Anonymous)
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I like how you brought Tom's mother along, in all a great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked Merope!
| Title: The Child Under The Tree
| 06 Jul 2011 9:04 pm
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| Reviewer: ---- (Anonymous)
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Yes, I completely agree: This is much better than DH.
Author's Response: That's a very kind thing to say, thank you!
Aw! That was sad! And sweet! However, I hope that this doesnt mean it is almost over, because Harry only killed the horcrux in him... Right? Anyways, great chapter!
Author's Response: No, there are a few chapters yet to come! Thank you very much for reviewing!
| Title: The Child Under The Tree
| 06 Jul 2011 8:50 pm
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| Reviewer: wynnleaf (Anonymous)
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Very nice. I didn't expect the part about Tom's mother. Good idea to bring her into the story! A great way to deal with Tom's infantile soul - much better than in DH.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you think so - I always felt uneasy about the baby in DH; no matter how physically revolting it may have been, it was still just a baby. Thank you very much!
| Title: The Child Under The Tree
| 06 Jul 2011 8:50 pm
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| Reviewer: Sam (Anonymous)
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Stop writing such amazing chapters so that I can stop spending all of my time waiting for updates. (But don't really.) ;)
Author's Response: What a nice thing to say! I hope I can keep it up, and keep you glued to your screen :). Thank you very much!
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