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Reviews For Through a Glass, Darkly
Author's Response: I'm glad you do, thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, Dumbledore wants Harry to be safe, but he might have had his own agenda in suggesting that Harry become an apprentice ;)... thank you for reviewing!
Author's Response: Mmhh, thank you for the sweets :)! I'm glad you liked the chapter!
Author's Response: I know what you mean, and when I was writing the "waking up"-scene, I wished I could have Snape give him a hug, at least... but I think Sev still needs a little more time. If Harry was a cheerful and open child, he might initiate hugs or affectionate exchanges, but as Harry comes with his own baggage, it felt more right to have those two treat each other rather carefully, if that makes sense. Thank you very much for sharing your thoughts!
Oh Lucius, you XDDD So apprentice, eh? I'll take that one. Looking forward to more. Author's Response: Oh yes, and they have bi-quarterly meetings and their own club magazine! XD Thank you for reviewing!
Author's Response: Thank you very much - it's feedback like this that makes my day!
One technical comment--near the end--durring the "Snape/Dumbledor conversation" it became a bit challenging to follow--unclear as to who was speaking and what exactly they were talking about. You might watch that in the future. Thanks for the update! V. Author's Response: I know what you mean - I wasn't quite happy with this part of the chapter either, but couldn't think of another way of having Snape recall his conversation with Dumbledore. Maybe I should have made it another scene altogether. Thank you for the concrit!
Author's Response: Oh yes, Lucius and Narcissa are quite the social strategists... thank you for reviewing! |
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