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Title: Press Cuttings 14 Jul 2011 10:13 pm
Reviewer: Vulpixer (Anonymous) [Report This]
    *squeals and dances* ^-^ Happiness! Such a lovely chapter! .> Wonderful chapter!! Apprentice! Yay!! *gives mounds of freshly baked sweets*

    Author's Response: Mmhh, thank you for the sweets :)! I'm glad you liked the chapter!
Title: Press Cuttings 14 Jul 2011 8:59 pm
Reviewer: DestinedMommy (Signed) [Report This]
    this is fantastic! i loved this chapter thought i did wish snape showed his affection for harry a bit more...openly but lol guess ur trying to keep him character still tho i'd like to see more interaction b/e them! plz plz update soon can't w8 to read the nxt chapter!

    Author's Response: I know what you mean, and when I was writing the "waking up"-scene, I wished I could have Snape give him a hug, at least... but I think Sev still needs a little more time. If Harry was a  cheerful and open child, he might initiate hugs or affectionate exchanges, but as Harry comes with his own baggage, it felt more right to have those two treat each other rather carefully, if that makes sense. Thank you very much for sharing your thoughts!
Title: Press Cuttings 13 Jul 2011 11:34 pm
Reviewer: ariablu (Signed) [Report This]
    "President of the Peacock Appreciation Society" made my day.
    Oh Lucius, you XDDD
    So apprentice, eh? I'll take that one.
    Looking forward to more.

    Author's Response: Oh yes, and they have bi-quarterly meetings and their own club magazine! XD Thank you for reviewing!
Title: Press Cuttings 13 Jul 2011 1:29 pm
Reviewer: caecelia (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This story is extraordinarily well plotted and written. Your attention to detail and to character is deeply appreciated: Every chapter is a delight.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much - it's feedback like this that makes my day!
Title: Press Cuttings 13 Jul 2011 6:31 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    I like it! Harry as Snape's apprentice is a great solution to the problem.

    One technical comment--near the end--durring the "Snape/Dumbledor conversation" it became a bit challenging to follow--unclear as to who was speaking and what exactly they were talking about. You might watch that in the future.

    Thanks for the update!
    V.

    Author's Response: I know what you mean - I wasn't quite happy with this part of the chapter either, but couldn't think of another way of having Snape recall his conversation with Dumbledore. Maybe I should have made it another scene altogether. Thank you for the concrit!
Title: Press Cuttings 13 Jul 2011 5:31 am
Reviewer: Doxie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Another enjoyable chapter. Those Malfoys are very slippery, aren't they? ;) Thanks for posting so quickly.

    Author's Response: Oh yes, Lucius and Narcissa are quite the social strategists... thank you for reviewing!
Title: Press Cuttings 13 Jul 2011 5:14 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    *grins and perks up* Apprentice? I'll take that one! I cannot wait to see how that conversation goes. Go Sev!

    Author's Response: Yeah, go Snape :)! I don't his new responsibilities have quite sunk in yet ;)... thank you for reviewing!
Title: Survivor 12 Jul 2011 5:23 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Yea! Harry is alive. Sev needs to work on his self esteem though (I mean that as a compliment to you. In reality, it is very likely Sev, even in the books, has a low opinion about himself as a person due to his father's abuse).

    His devotion... you also captured that beautifully! No wonder Harry is lucky to have him.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much! And I agree, for all his outward confidence, Snape has a rather low opinion of himself... I'm glad I managed to get that across! Thank you for reviewing!
Title: Survivor 12 Jul 2011 12:55 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Love Harry's slip about his rival house great chapter

    Author's Response: Thank you! I have to admit that I agree with Snape - Dumbledore deserved Harry's answer after his remark on "Gryffindor traits" ;).... thank you very much for reviewing!
Title: Survivor 11 Jul 2011 7:38 am
Reviewer: ObsessiveaboutSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    i love you. i love severus. i love harry. i love albus. i love this story, and the brain that thought it up. you are incredible. thank you so much. i'll go to bed now.

    Author's Response: I love your review :) - thank you very much for the kind feedback! I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

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