| Title: Later
| 17 May 2014 1:10 am
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| Reviewer: angelique (Anonymous)
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Wow, a lot of emotions in this chapter, I really like your portrayal of Snape and his inner thoughts,self-doubt and tremor, and so on, now that he has the full responsiblity of a young child... I really like the idea of Harry as Snape's apprentice, and it was fascinating to read about the ritual... I would love to see and sequel to this story, in order to see how their life turns out as master and apprentice... I love your Harry and Snape, and the alternate universe you created in this story! The climax and top moment in this chapter was their conversation about Lily and the end, Harry delivering Lily's greeting from beyond the veil... wow, that was powerful!
| Title: Press Cuttings
| 17 May 2014 12:54 am
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| Reviewer: Angelique (Anonymous)
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Great chapter, as usual... No, I was not surprised that Harry ends up as Snape's apprentice ( considering the clues in Snape's thoughts earlier). I would have loved to see Harry's reaction when Snape brought him the news,i.e. to read the following conservation between them... anyhow, awesome story, I love it!
This story, this whole damned thing, made my heart sing in way I never thought possible. Thank you so much for this, I think you've ruined me.
Excellent: Very well written, original premise and well thought out storyline. I would definitely enjoy reading more of your contributions; you actually write like an adult which is greatly appreciated!
Thank you for a wonderful read!
| Title: Epilogue: Malfoy Manor
| 16 Nov 2013 5:08 pm
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| Reviewer: Eszther (Anonymous)
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I can't believe I have missed this story so far. I have just spent some very enjoyable hours with your wonderful tale, thank you! (Poor Severus, I am glad my children are old enough to be dropped off at parties ...)
| Title: Epilogue: Malfoy Manor
| 31 Dec 2012 8:05 am
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| Reviewer: nell (Anonymous)
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A beautifully done story. The child abuse, though horrid was well done. As a reader I felt the sorrow for the child. A delightful solution, an apprentice. The party was a hoot.
A perfect end - and beginning :)
Well...even though I should gave been doing other things today, you had me totally hooked from the opening sentence.
Thank you so much for sharing such a wonderful story.
Ahhhh...good to know that the Malfoys remain the same, no matter what universe they inhabit.
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