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Title: Scars 09 Jun 2011 3:57 pm
Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed) [Report This]
    wow that was amazing and i agree with Poppy there is defintly some sort of rapport between Severus and Harry. perhaps Harrysees a bit of a kindred spirit!!!
    love the use of latin
    Severus is defintly in for a difficult convosation with Dmbles that is for sure

    Author's Response: Yes, Harry and Severus probably have a similar outlook on the world, i.e., a distrustful one. Thank you for reviewing, I'm glad you're enjoying the story!
Title: Scars 09 Jun 2011 2:13 pm
Reviewer: alwaysmaddi (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a really enjoyable read, it is easy to follow, without being too predictable. It is intriguing and makes me want to keep reading. =]

    In a few places I think you should work on your phrasing, as the story seems to lose its flow. Maybe reread it another time, and don't be afraid to make changes?

    Keep it up =]

    Author's Response: Thank you! And thanks for the heads-up on the phrasing, I'll try to improve that. It would be great if you could let me know what lines/passages you were referring to exactly; I don't have a beta for this story, so any advice is much appreciated. Thanks again!
Title: Scars 09 Jun 2011 3:47 am
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow! I loved the story! I mean, it's dark and sad, but I loved how Snape is in this story and how Draco is also. I hope they will support Harry and grow into a trusting companionship.

    Author's Response: I'm glad you like Snape and Draco; yes, Harry's lucky to have them. Thank you for reviewing!
Title: Scars 09 Jun 2011 2:55 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry!

    Now, I just have to wonder, how much of that "torture" (for that is what happened!) was brought on by whatever is inhabiting that scar of his. Did it taunt the Dursley's until they snapped? Or are the muggles just "that" evil?

    Great chapter! Thanks for the update!
    V.

    Author's Response: Hmmm, I can't really answer without giving spoilers... but there'll be more about Harry's home life in the upcoming chapters! Thank you for sharing your thoughts!
Title: Scars 09 Jun 2011 2:14 am
Reviewer: LegolasAnimeLuver (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh this is getting good. It was a rather short chapter though.

    Author's Response: Next one will be longer, I promise! Thank you for reviewing!
Title: Scars 09 Jun 2011 12:06 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Liked your Pomfrey and the rapport she and Severus have thank you

    Author's Response: Yes, somehow she and Severus seem to be on the same wavelength... they're both quite down-to-earth, and deeply concerned for the students. I'm glad I managed to get that across! Thank you for reviewing!
Title: Encounter 08 Jun 2011 11:58 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow this was a horror film chapter very powerful thank you

    Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, thank you!
Title: Scars 08 Jun 2011 11:57 pm
Reviewer: Victoire (Signed) [Report This]
    Ohh, something is starting there! A bit cute-but-sad chapter... but it will be interesting. Keep up the work!

    Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked the chapter!
Title: Scars 08 Jun 2011 11:46 pm
Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Well, I'm curious what will Dumbledore say to this. And also I'm curious if Harry will learn Latin and surprise Severus =o)

    Author's Response: Harry just might! Thank you for reviewing!
Title: Scars 08 Jun 2011 11:22 pm
Reviewer: silvermoonfae (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant, love it and can't wait for Snape's conversation with Dumbledore. More chapter's mean more chocolate ;)

    Author's Response: That's good, because I'm addicted :)! Thank you for reviewing!

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