Loved this! - Harry is adorable already and I really liked the way Snape handled this new situation - still brisk and professional, but showing a more caring side - I like!! :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, thank you for reviewing!
I like!! Much good. :0)
Author's Response: Thank you :)!
great chapter Snape has realized it is a very slippary slope for him and Harry if he is to help. I look forward to reading more
Author's Response: Yes, helping Harry won't be easy... thank you for the feedback, I'm glad you liked the chapter!
| Title: Emergency Rations
| 02 Jun 2011 4:15 pm
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| Reviewer: TATIS (Signed)
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very good, poor harry , I love this Snape
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you like my Snape (not that he's mine... don't I wish^^)!
Great update, but too short! *whine* Love this story! I think you're writing both Severus and Harry very well. I wonder what Dumbledore will say when he hears Harry's relatives have been starving him? Hopefully, he won't be a dork about it.
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, I noticed that the chapter was quite short when I saw the word count after uploading, but don't worry; the chapters will get longer as the story progresses, I promise :)! Thank you very much for the feedback!
| Title: Emergency Rations
| 02 Jun 2011 12:55 pm
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| Reviewer: Gretchen (Anonymous)
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Oh, I'm so glad you updated this tonight! Poor Harry. His food collection is one of the saddest things I've ever read. :( I hope it gets better for him soon now that Snape is on the case.
I love how you wrote Draco, too. Him criticizing Harry's clothes and insulting Crabbe and Goyle is so in character. I can completely imagine him slipping in concerned little comments about food hoarding in the middle of that.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked Draco; we'll be seeing more of him in the upcoming chapters. Yes, Snape will definitely keep an eye on Harry from now on. Thanks for sharing your thoughts!
Again, well done and I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!
| Title: Essays
| 31 May 2011 6:59 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved the essays you caught the children so well but I'm confused about Blaize is he a girl in this story?
Author's Response: I think I created some confusion by not placing Blaise in Harry's dorm, lol! Blaise is actually his canon (male) self; it's just that I had this idea that there were several dorms for the first-year boys - which I'm beginning to think is not what everybody else thinks! Anyway, thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you liked the essays!
| Title: Essays
| 31 May 2011 5:54 pm
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| Reviewer: tommy's girl78 (Anonymous)
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i like this stories so far hope you update very very soon
Author's Response: Just got a bit of final editing to do, so I should be updating some time tomorrow... thank you for letting me know what you think!
Brilliant! Can't wait for more! xx
Author's Response: More will be up soon! Thanks for reviewing!
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