wow well done love that you got the personality of each child so well and Harry's essay yeah defintly more questions than answers poor Severus. Can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: Yes, Snape has his work cut out for him... thank you very much for sharing your thoughts!
| Title: Essays
| 31 May 2011 7:58 am
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| Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous)
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Liked the highly characteristic essays.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed them!
| Title: Essays
| 31 May 2011 4:33 am
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| Reviewer: Doxie (Anonymous)
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Interesting and fun start. Can't wait for your update.
Author's Response: Thank you! The next update should be coming soon.
| Title: Essays
| 31 May 2011 1:17 am
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| Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous)
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Excellent beginning. I wonder if Ron and Hermione will be Harry's friends still. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you! There'll be more about Harry's interactions with the other students in the upcoming chapters. Thanks for letting me know what you think!
fascinating
Author's Response: Thank you!
| Title: Essays
| 30 May 2011 11:47 pm
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| Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous)
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I like that Severus set an essay for his students in order to get to know them and see what needs have to be met for them. I can't wait to read what happens in the remedial tutoring sessions. Since Harry is a Slytherin, Theodore Nott's essay should read that there are 5 other boys in his dorm. It appears that some of the children do not know how to write an essay.
Author's Response: Yes, I imagine that quite a few of Snape's new Slytherins haven't had an ideal educational background. I'm not sure about the dorms, actually - the idea was that Draco, Theo, Vince Greg and Harry share a dorm, while Blaise and some other Slyth first-year boys share another. I always imagined there to be several dorms for each year, but maybe I'm mistaken. Thank you very much for sharing your thoughts!
Great chapter. I can't wait for the next.
-Ashley
Author's Response: Thank you!
Loveing this so far I am a huge fan of the idea of a slytherin Harry i think it brings a tottally different tone to a story.
Can't wait to read more
Author's Response: Yes, I have to admit I find Slytherin to be the most interesting of the four Hogwarts Houses... more will be up soon, thank you for the feedback!
So far I'm very excited for this story :) I look forward to seeing how you develop Harry as a Slytherin firstie :p
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it so far!
| Title: The Sorting
| 29 May 2011 6:45 pm
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| Reviewer: Doewke (Anonymous)
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Wow, really nice start! Lovely portrait of Harry! I am curious how he experiences everything around him! But more importantly I'm dying to know what Harry's life story is up until now...
Author's Response: Thank you! We'll learn more of Harry's life story in later chapters. Thanks for the feedback!
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