Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: The Sorting 29 May 2011 1:34 pm
Reviewer: Marion (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ohh, well done! This is the first fic of its kind (Slytherin!Harry) which I've read with such enjoyment!

    I like Snape's thought processes; he is neither villyfied by the author (MeanBully!Snape) nor turned into DreamDaddy!Snape, or even worse, in a combination of the two (Mean Bully Snape Who Is Totally Prejudiced And Mean To Poor Angelic Harrykins But Finds Out He Has Been Wrong All This Time, Apologises And Becomes Dream Daddy Snape is my ulitmate pet peeve, since I happen to think that Canon!Snape isn't a mean bully nor do I fin Canon!Harry angelic).

    This Snape is a good Housefather to his Slytherins, observant and a keen judge of character and, unlike any other (canon) teacher, NOT so preoccupied with the bloody Boy Who Lived that he ignores the other students.

    Bravo!

    Author's Response: Thank you for the feedback! I'm glad you liked my Snape; I find it's always a fine balance between his admittedly negative outlook on the world and the fact that he does take his responsibilities seriously. If I managed to get that across, I'm glad. Thanks again!
Title: The Sorting 29 May 2011 1:31 pm
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really love the story so far and I would love to read more.. I would like to see the interaction between Snape and Harry

    Author's Response: Thank you! More Snape and Harry will be coming up soon...
Title: The Sorting 29 May 2011 7:21 am
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed) [Report This]
    So good. It's a really in-character depiction so far, which I like, and I like your descriptions of everyone too. Sometimes I skim over long conversation or long descriptions to get to the point, but not in your story. Everything is balanced just right here! Keep it up and looking forward to more!

    Author's Response: Thank you, I really appreciate what you said about my writing! Thank you very much for reviewing; more should be coming soon...
Title: The Sorting 29 May 2011 6:55 am
Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I usually like Slytherin Harry fics, so I am looking forward to where you take this. I like that you put Hermione in Ravenclaw; will she and Harry become friends? Aren't there an even number of prefects--boy and girl for each House in each year for the 5th through 7th years?

    Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, I think you're right, I should probably change it into three boys and three girls (I expect Snape will be glad for even more female help ;)! ). As for Hermione, she'll definitely play a part in the chapters to come. Thanks for the feedback!
Title: The Sorting 29 May 2011 6:13 am
Reviewer: Helene (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome beginning! You've hooked me and I want to see where you take this next. I love Snape's introduction speech especially.

    Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you're hooked! Next chapter should be up soon!
Title: The Sorting 29 May 2011 6:09 am
Reviewer: Inu Chan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hmm...I am intrigued. I have developed a fondness for Slytherin!Harry stories, and this one promises to be good. So far, everyone seems to be behaving reasonably in character. I like your Snape; are you a teacher or do you know one? I'm getting a very realistic teacher vibe from him. Write more soon.

    Author's Response: Hehe, guilty as charged. Yes, I'm a teacher, although unfortunately my subject's not as interesting as Potions... thank you very much for reviewing!
Title: The Sorting 29 May 2011 6:01 am
Reviewer: chrmisha (Signed) [Report This]
    Fantastic start! I can't wait to see where this goes! Great job!

    Author's Response: Thank you so much! More will be coming soon...
Title: The Sorting 29 May 2011 5:31 am
Reviewer: Alchemist (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I think that this is a brilliant first chapter. Please continue with more well-written chapters, as I'm always a sucker for Slytherin Harry stories, and the prospect of a well-written one fills me with warm fuzzy thoughts.

    Author's Response: What a nice thing to say, thank you! I enjoy Slytherin Harry, too, and it was fun writing this different version of him.
Title: The Sorting 29 May 2011 4:41 am
Reviewer: Eliss (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very well written and imaginitive.
    I've read your other fics and enjoyed them....now I get to read a multi chapter fic by you!
    I'm excited for the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed my fics so far. Stay tuned for the next chapter, it will be up soon!
Title: The Sorting 29 May 2011 4:09 am
Reviewer: nightowllor (Signed) [Report This]
    Great start! I'm curious to see whether or not Hermione will become friends with Harry as she was sorted into Ravenclaw and he in Slytherin, and what will Harry's and Ron's relationship strecth towards as far as opposing House classmates. Interesting! Great job with Snape so far also. :)

    Author's Response: Yes, the trio is definitely starting under different conditions, having been separated by the Sorting Hat... thank you very much for reviewing!

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