| Title: Chapter one - prologue - how all of this began
| 13 Jul 2011 5:13 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Wow! This is a very intriguing plot. Great job. Onto the next chapter. I'm afraid for them all. What is going on? And how will they ever get out of there?
You've held the suspense very well. I'm impressed.
| Title: Chapter one - prologue - how all of this began
| 22 Jun 2011 6:51 pm
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| Reviewer: evil minded (Signed)
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to all: I do thank all of you for reviewing this story, chapter, never mind if I address you here personally or not - your reviews are very much appreciated ...
to cara-tanaka: nice to see you here as well, I've just stumbled over this site recently and I thought - try it ... nice to hear you like the story enough to read it again here ... thanks for reviewing ...
to misundersnape: I do thank you for your suggestion and for sharing your thoughts in this review, but yes, I have already planned out some thing for the next twenty-one days ... I do thank you for your review on this ...
to anathi: as to your question: my first language is German, but as I have an uncle that is from the states, and as I do not have trouble learning languages - I guess I manage somehow :-) ... I am glad that you think this story is intriguing and I do thank you for your review here in this chapter ...
to Lea: I do thank you for your greeting and I am glad that you love my stories ... I have settled well here, even if some functions I still have to figure out ... thanks for reviewing here on this story ...
to all: thanks for reading and reviewing ...
| Title: Chapter one - prologue - how all of this began
| 15 Jun 2011 12:07 am
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| Reviewer: SteveSettler (Anonymous)
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*rolls his eyes upon Jean's jumping around in the review box*
Typically Jean, but yes - I too love this story and I too am happy to read this story again. It's just too great!
| Title: Chapter one - prologue - how all of this began
| 06 Jun 2011 9:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great start thank you so much
| Title: Chapter one - prologue - how all of this began
| 06 Jun 2011 8:01 pm
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| Reviewer: JeanMcIory (Anonymous)
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*hops around the review box*
I do love this story very much, have read it on ff and I'm glad being able to read it again now!
| Title: Chapter one - prologue - how all of this began
| 04 Jun 2011 3:14 am
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| Reviewer: DestinedMommy (Signed)
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this is very intersting im really curious as to know wat's going on! i really hope u update soon b/c i wannt no wat happens nxt! well done :)
| Title: Chapter one - prologue - how all of this began
| 04 Jun 2011 12:10 am
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| Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous)
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Good start. I want to see where you go with this.
| Title: Chapter one - prologue - how all of this began
| 03 Jun 2011 11:14 pm
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| Reviewer: Lea (Anonymous)
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Wow, nice to see you at "potions&snitches". I love your stories :)
I hope you will settle here well and wiil update your all stories 9not only here ;))
| Title: Chapter one - prologue - how all of this began
| 03 Jun 2011 9:55 pm
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| Reviewer: anathi (Signed)
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Oh, this story is so intriguing!
I like the effect of your short scenes, cutting back and forth between the different charachters, and how you start each scene in the middle of the action. At the same time, your story reads smoothly, and it's not apparant to me that English isn't your first language. May I ask what is?
Looking forward to seeing how the dunderheads survive the dungeons!
Interesting story. I'm looking forward to the next installment. I'm really curious to see where you're going with it.
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