| Title: Chapter one - prologue - how all of this began
| 03 Jun 2011 6:25 am
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| Reviewer: saifai (Signed)
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Ooh, what a fascinating setup. I'm curious how they'll hold out that long.
| Title: Chapter one - prologue - how all of this began
| 03 Jun 2011 5:22 am
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| Reviewer: misundersnape (Signed)
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Despite your not so perfect English this is a good story. I'm enjoying it so far.
Perhaps the only thing I might have done differently at this stage is actually had the cauldron explode and hurt someone (a student or even Snape, or perhaps even both), even just a minor injury - so Snape had a (better) reason to send another student to the door to try to get out, however without knowing your plans for the direction of this I suppose this is a premature judgement. I imagine you have lots of incidents planned for the next 21 days.
Looking forward to more.
misundersnape...
| Title: Chapter one - prologue - how all of this began
| 03 Jun 2011 4:57 am
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| Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed)
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Yay. I love this story. I'm so glad your posting here. I get to read this story from the beginning again :D Welcome to P&S. Looking forward to the next chappie.
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