Could you get a beta or something? the story's pretty goodbut the grammar is sort of off putting
| Title: Day four - Thursday, fifth of September
| 19 Aug 2011 8:34 am
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| Reviewer: HPCHIC2011 (Signed)
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I love this. I found you on fanfiction and read it in it's entirety in one sitting. I have not enjoyed fiction so much in a long time!!
| Title: Day four - Thursday, fifth of September
| 18 Aug 2011 11:25 pm
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| Reviewer: evil minded (Signed)
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to all: I'm still on holidays, but I'll update here nevertheless ... I do thank all of you for reading and reviewing the last chapter ...
to SevSnape: yes, hi there too :-) ... thanks for reviewing ...
to cara-tanaka: I'm glad to hear this and I do thank you for reading again and reviewing again ...
to nightshade-sydnylover: I do hope that you won't expect I'd answer any of your questions ... *lol* ... you'll have to read the upcoming chapters ... I however am glad that you seem to like the story and I do thank you for reviewing ...
to phoenix: I agree with you, Snape does need sleep as well, and he'll get it, just wait ... thanks for sharing your thoughts on your review ...
to DestinedMommy: thanks for reviewing here and I'm glad you liked it ... I'll update as soon as this site allows ...
to tabbycat: maybe Ron would be better, maybe not - thatfor this is fic ... you'll wait and see what will happen with Ron in future ... but thanks for reading and reviewing ...
to Fmh: I'm glad you liked this and I do thank you for reviewing ...
| Title: Day four - Thursday, fifth of September
| 15 Aug 2011 11:35 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved the rules and how he got the students to write them down thank you
| Title: Day four - Thursday, fifth of September
| 13 Aug 2011 10:36 pm
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| Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed)
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Love this story!! Looking forward to your next update. I like how you've made Draco more mature and peace-seeking than in the books. But I think Ron would be better than you've portrayed him. :)
im glad u updated! this was clearly an emotion filled chapter and i really enjoyed reading it! please update soon im really looking 4ward to the nxt chapter!
| Title: Day four - Thursday, fifth of September
| 13 Aug 2011 4:21 am
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| Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed)
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This is wonderful by the way, but Snape is making the children sleep but a no time has Snape slept in the four days. When does he get some rest?
I agree with Snape. I've had to do certain versions with this before for counseling, especially when they were suicidal. Both boys handled it better than any people I've worked with. I love this chapter and how much you have shown that Severus cares for these kids. I look forward to reading more.
Here's the question, why hasn't Dumbles and Minerva released all the "prisoners" yet? How will Snape keep Harry from going back to his relatives? What will happen with Teddy? What is up with Ron and the other Gryff boys (except Neville)? How are the Gryff girls and Slytherin girls handling each other? How are Harry and Draco doing with each other? How about Teddy and Harry?
| Title: Day four - Thursday, fifth of September
| 13 Aug 2011 2:45 am
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| Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed)
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I don't think it's possible to get tired of reading this. It's too good, even though I've read it already. Update again soon :D
| Title: Day four - Thursday, fifth of September
| 13 Aug 2011 12:07 am
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| Reviewer: SevSnape (Signed)
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Glad to see you again!
Thanks for the update!
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