| Title: Day one - Monday, second of September
| 23 Jun 2011 4:00 am
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| Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous)
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I like the story so far. I understand why the Gryffindors are referred to by their last names, as the story is mainly from Snape's point of view. But why refer to all of the Slytherins by their first names, except for Crabbe and Goyle? There were a few misspelled words and names. Looking forward to more.
they hv to spend 21 days down there??? dear god i hope not
i really enjoyed reading this story! i love the way u've portrayed their characters please update soon!!
| Title: Day one - Monday, second of September
| 22 Jun 2011 10:26 pm
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| Reviewer: Gryffinclaw (Signed)
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I've been following this story since January and eagerly await future chapters (as well as Severus' reaction upon learning the truth about Harry's homelife). I like that you have another character present in a similar situation, whom Severus is already aware of (Theodore- I like the characterization of him by the way).
Looking forward to Day 2
-Gryffinclaw
| Title: Day one - Monday, second of September
| 22 Jun 2011 9:52 pm
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| Reviewer: tonyfan114 (Signed)
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cant wait for the next chapter i love this story
| Title: Day one - Monday, second of September
| 22 Jun 2011 9:52 pm
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| Reviewer: tonyfan114 (Signed)
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cant wait for the next chapter i love this story
| Title: Day one - Monday, second of September
| 22 Jun 2011 9:09 pm
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| Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed)
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Oh, I'm really enjoying this! It's an intriguing twist with the whole class and Severus locked up by the castle itself. I like how you've thought through the details, how Dumbledore's spell confused the castle and it shut itself down, and the effect of the exploding potion sealing off the dungeons. It's very curious how their magic has stopped working too.
It's a very realistic portrayal, how everyone is tense and worrried, but thankfully they're keeping it under control so far. I can understand Severus' dread that he might have to comfort panic-stricken students, especially Gryffindors! In spite of the tense atmosphere, that thought made me smile. I feel sorry for Theodore and of course for Harry, both so worried about their classmates discovering their nightmares.
Hopefully this will lead to new understandings between the Slytherins and the Gryffindors, as well as with Harry and Severus. I can only imagine everyone's shock when the kids all emerge as best friends now, lol.
I hope they can find some food soon, though! Great chapter again and I'm looking forward to more.
| Title: Chapter one - prologue - how all of this began
| 22 Jun 2011 6:51 pm
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| Reviewer: evil minded (Signed)
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to all: I do thank all of you for reviewing this story, chapter, never mind if I address you here personally or not - your reviews are very much appreciated ...
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to misundersnape: I do thank you for your suggestion and for sharing your thoughts in this review, but yes, I have already planned out some thing for the next twenty-one days ... I do thank you for your review on this ...
to anathi: as to your question: my first language is German, but as I have an uncle that is from the states, and as I do not have trouble learning languages - I guess I manage somehow :-) ... I am glad that you think this story is intriguing and I do thank you for your review here in this chapter ...
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to all: thanks for reading and reviewing ...
| Title: Chapter one - prologue - how all of this began
| 15 Jun 2011 12:07 am
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| Reviewer: SteveSettler (Anonymous)
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*rolls his eyes upon Jean's jumping around in the review box*
Typically Jean, but yes - I too love this story and I too am happy to read this story again. It's just too great!
| Title: Chapter one - prologue - how all of this began
| 06 Jun 2011 9:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great start thank you so much
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