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Title: Prologue: The Cottage 10 Jul 2011 12:52 pm
Reviewer: Wendy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Loved it thanks for writing. read all your stories on ffnet but many were unfinished and the Harry stories appear to have been removed. I am not by any means a great literary critic but even I can see that your writing has improved greatly over the years.
    Sev teaching Harry how to knot his tie brought back fond memories of my Dad doing the same before I started grammar school aged 11,(not sure if girls wear ties as part of the uniform in the US but they do here in the UK at some schools). I went to a boarding school which also had day pupils. anyway loking forward to year 2.
Title: Prologue: The Cottage 07 Jul 2011 9:55 pm
Reviewer: twilight1987 (Signed) [Report This]
    I thought you needed 100 reviews to even things up... Plus I love this story and haven't reviewed this chapter. Lol. Anyways, awesome story! I hope you continue to write it for a long... Long.... LONG time. Especially now that Harry has a family. And Lily.... Surely her sister must pay for what she did. I could go on and on about this story as it is one of my favorite on
    this site. Keep up the great work!
Title: Prologue: The Cottage 10 Jun 2011 6:19 pm
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    'time armorial...it's 'time immemorial'
Title: Prologue: The Cottage 06 Jun 2011 2:21 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    This was a good chapter. i liked the idea of this cottage beside the Muggle village. I also liked how Lily and Severus were married and that Severus wanted lots of kids. I agree with Lily, he'd be a good father.

    I was surprised that Lily was urging him to a reconciliaton with his father. That's a touchy subject, because obviously Severus was very hurt whenTobias became an alcoholic. I'm assuming Eileen died in that car crash? That's a hell of a thing for a son to forgive his father for. And whle I understand that Lily wants them to be a family again, it's still a very very sore subject. I can see why Severus is reluctant to forgive the man, and even though Tobias is technically paying for his crime, I think Severus will ever feel it's enough, since he took away Eileen from him.

    I think Severus should be allowed to make up his own mind if and when he wishes to reconcile, because pushing him to do so will only cause resentment and anger.

    It could take years, as I know all too well, since I had a family member who was an alcoholic for years and wrecked his marriage and it took his wife and kids years to trust and reconcile with him after he finally decided to quit the bottle for good.

    I liked that Lily is supposed to be a teacher too.

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