love the story, so far!! great job!!!
Well, this was a most puzzling chapter. How could Harry be James's son when Lily was married to Severus? Did they get divorced? Go under cover or something? I'll bet the meddling old coot in the office had something to do with that.
If Harry is Sev's son, why doesn't Severus remember that? Possibly a Memory Charm?
Lily is alive and in a coma, but why did Petunia get Harry if he's Severus' son?
I have many questions . . . and hope I'll get some answers as the story goes on.
Oh, and one other thing, why does Ron have a broad Cockney accent? It almost reminded me of Eliza Dolittle in My Fair Lady.
I love your stories. I can't wait to follow this one
| Title: It Begins
| 05 Jun 2011 10:15 pm
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| Reviewer: tabbycat (Anonymous)
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Hi!
Ooh! I'm curious as to what's gone on! Is Harry James' son?? And Lily survived? Hope you update again soon. :)
oh this is very very interesting!! im dying to know wat happened! u must update soon i look forward to reading the nxt chapter!
Interesting! Keep updating!! That lily was a bomb!
| Title: It Begins
| 05 Jun 2011 6:50 pm
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| Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous)
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I love the story. I am most intigued my the story and the ending of the last chapter. I would love to continue to find out how the story will progress.
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