That was very interesting. About Lucius being Severus' older half-brother. I don't think I've seen that done before. Nice twist! You know the old saying, Satan was Christ's elder brother? The same could apply to Lucius and Sev.
I'm glad Severus is keeping a firm hand and eye on Malfoy, because somebody has to. I wonder what Severus' reaction will be to finding out he was right about Mcgonagall putting Harry on the team?
And yay, Lily is starting to wake up!
| Title: On the Wrong foot
| 06 Jun 2011 2:23 am
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| Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous)
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I like the chapter but there were a few things I had a problem with. I am fine with Severus and Draco being half-brothers. However, I didn't like how you changed character names and ages. There are five years of age between Lucius and Severus. Draco's middle name is Lucius and Lucius' father is named Abraxas.
Author's Response: Glad you liked the story, and I'm sorry the changes bothered you...but this is an AU (alternate universe) after all. I am afriad I am not as well versed in the tinier details of the Harry Potter world as some. I hope you will continue to read the story, anyway. Thanks again for the review.
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