"Since I know snakes don’t have backbones, I guess I’ll have to go by myself."
Best line I have read in awhile and I am surprised I haven't read it more often. :P
| Title: The Forbidden Duel
| 14 Jun 2011 5:13 am
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| Reviewer: hawkswench (Anonymous)
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""Oh," Harry said, quietly. "Sir, will tell me some more about my mum. Please? I don’t anything about her, really." "
You forgot the word know between don't and anything.
This was a good chapter. I liked how Draco and Harry insulted each other and then went to find the unicorn and the disgusting vampiric Voldemort.
Loved Severus' reaction to finding them and his Animagus form was a surprise.
His discipline of Harry was fair, though I do have a question about something else mentioned in the chapter. I'll PM you with it.
I liked how Lily is becoming more aware with each chapter. I hope she wakes up soon.
| Title: The Forbidden Duel
| 08 Jun 2011 10:49 pm
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| Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous)
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| Title: The Forbidden Duel
| 08 Jun 2011 10:41 pm
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| Reviewer: Ragnhild (Anonymous)
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Good story. On a side note, corporal punishment is prohibited in British schools. "In state-run schools, and also in private schools where at least part of the funding came from government, corporal punishment was outlawed by Parliament with effect from 1987." (Source: Wikipedia) I assume that since the Ministry of Magic "intervene" at Hogwarts several times during the series, at least some of the funding for the school comes from the Ministry.
this ws well written i liked how snape wasn't overly harsh can't w8 to read more!
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