Oh wow. What a shock. I like how you did the reveal of Harry being Snape's son. It's original having the test reveal that Harry and Draco are related, therefore meaning that Snape and Harry must be related in that case too.
I hope that Snape and Harry have the chance to grow closer. I'm also intrigued what part Lily will play in it all.
Good story LeeRoy.
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| 11 Jun 2011 3:59 am
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| Reviewer: Judy (Anonymous)
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Awesome - I can't wait for the next chapter!
| Title: A Relative Matter
| 11 Jun 2011 12:38 am
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| Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous)
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Wow! Super chapter! It must be a shock for Severus and Harry. I'm curious if Harry and Draco will be friends..and how it will take Ron - because Ron can be sometimes a real prat.
I really liked the potions class and the comments about Goyle and Neville blowing up the castle. I also think it's a good idea to have Slytherin partner Gryffindor there, that way they won't attempt to ruin each other's potions. I liked the way Sev explained the potion to Hermione, it was well done.
So was the explanation about Severus' past and his parents. I had a feeling that Tobias was the cause of Eileen's death. Poor Severus, stuck with the corrupt Malfoys! I am glad that Lily forgave him and got help, although if Dumbledore was there, he could have stopped Sev's fall with that spell he used on Harry at the Quidditch match. Why didn't he just throw a Body Bind on Severus?
I'm glad the cousins know the truth now.
I noticed one mistake. Severus is speaking about Tobias and says,
You also began to drink—and when he was drunk he could be very mean and hurtful.
It should be "he" also began to drink.
Will Lily wake up next chapter?
so looks like lily is finilly wakeing up i'm glad that snape found out ealy harry is his son please update very soon this is really good story i'd love to see it commpleated
Wow, what a shocker chapter! I like the story even more now!
Great chapter! There were a few spelling errors, though. I take it that Lily will wake up soon. Will the cousins become friends? When will Harry tell Ron and Hermione? Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
| Title: A Relative Matter
| 10 Jun 2011 5:22 am
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| Reviewer: Twilight1987 (Anonymous)
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A. W. E. S. O. M. E. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Update soon, I want to know what happens next :D
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