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Title: The Unusual Detention 07 Feb 2017 3:15 am
Reviewer: Pug Mom 10 (Signed) [Report This]
    Love happy ending chapie!!!
Title: The Unusual Detention 15 Jun 2011 2:34 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Hi!

    I reviewed this a few days ago and don't know why it didn't post. Oh well, maybe it timed out? Had that happen before.

    Anyway, just wanted to say I loved the chapter especially the end with Lily and Harry and Sev! So sweet! I also liked that Severus took them to see the Longbottoms to show how bad the DE really are. Seeing concrete damage makes it more real to kids than if they're just told that such and such did evil things.
Title: The Unusual Detention 13 Jun 2011 2:57 am
Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yay! Lily is awake! I'm happy for her and her family =o)
    I'm looking forward the next chapter =o)
Title: The Unusual Detention 12 Jun 2011 5:49 pm
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love the new chapters... Sev being Harry's father is great and Lily waking up is just the icing on the cake... I hope you update soon because I can't wait for more.
Title: The Unusual Detention 12 Jun 2011 5:31 pm
Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I'm glad that Lily is awake. I look forward to the conversation where Lily gives her reasons for not telling Severus about Harry. Why did you make Lily (and Severus) four years older?

    Author's Response: I've always pictured Severus as being in his mid-thirties...besides, just because they come of age at seventeen in the Wizarding World doesn't actually make them 'grown ups'. I wanted them to be around twenty when they got married and have Harry's first year be fifteen years after that. Does that make sense? Glad you like the story. Please, keep reading.
Title: The Unusual Detention 12 Jun 2011 12:04 pm
Reviewer: Zireael07 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, I love Lily waking up and her interactions with others...

    BTW will Malfoy go and blab to his Dad that Lily Potter is alive?

    Author's Response: No--he'd never betray his 'Uncle Sev' like that. At least, not in this story. Lucius will making an appearance very soon, though. Stay tuned. *smirks*
Title: The Unusual Detention 12 Jun 2011 9:20 am
Reviewer: Min (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Cool!
Title: The Unusual Detention 12 Jun 2011 7:47 am
Reviewer: Jyllian (Signed) [Report This]
    I can't find this story on fanfiction.net...I think I like it so far, hard to tell...

    Author's Response:

    I haven't posted this story on ff.net yet--sorry. Pleas keep reading. It's going to get even better.

Title: The Unusual Detention 12 Jun 2011 7:33 am
Reviewer: Rosa_Sweet (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely chapter, one question though- why doesn't Ron pronounce his 'h's? In the books he always did

    Author's Response: I know this is gonna sound silly, but in the first three movies Rupert (who plays Ron) whenever he'd say Harry's name it would sound like 'Arry to me...so when I' writing that who I picture as Ron and so therefore that's how I write him. I apologize if it bothers you, but...well, does it make too much difference? Does it ruin the story? I don't think so, anyway. Does that explain things better?
Title: The Unusual Detention 12 Jun 2011 6:32 am
Reviewer: Twilight1987 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ahhhhh!!!!! I can't believe Harry had to leave! That was sad! Nothing is going to happen to Lily is it? I mean she JUST woke up! When is she gonna find out that Sev knows Harry is his? And obvisouly, Lily loves Sev.... Ahhh! That was an awesome chapter! I hope you update soon.... Also... I mean, Sev practically told her that he knew Harry was his.... Hmmmm.... Well, great job and looking forward to the rest!

    Author's Response: No, Lily will be fine. I just couldn't have them hash everything out in one chapter...for the most part this story will focus on Harry and Severus. Lily, since she has to stay in the hospital awhile, will get to act as a 'sounding board' as it were for the two of them. She can offer advice to Severus about how to handle Harry's more rambuncious side and tell Harry more about the side of Severus *she* knows. Does that make since? And yes, Severus and Lily will be talking soon about the whole 'why didn't you tell me' thing. Just keep reading. I think you'll be pleased.

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