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Reviews For A First Time for Everything
I reviewed this a few days ago and don't know why it didn't post. Oh well, maybe it timed out? Had that happen before. Anyway, just wanted to say I loved the chapter especially the end with Lily and Harry and Sev! So sweet! I also liked that Severus took them to see the Longbottoms to show how bad the DE really are. Seeing concrete damage makes it more real to kids than if they're just told that such and such did evil things.
I'm looking forward the next chapter =o)
Author's Response: I've always pictured Severus as being in his mid-thirties...besides, just because they come of age at seventeen in the Wizarding World doesn't actually make them 'grown ups'. I wanted them to be around twenty when they got married and have Harry's first year be fifteen years after that. Does that make sense? Glad you like the story. Please, keep reading.
BTW will Malfoy go and blab to his Dad that Lily Potter is alive? Author's Response: No--he'd never betray his 'Uncle Sev' like that. At least, not in this story. Lucius will making an appearance very soon, though. Stay tuned. *smirks*
Author's Response: I haven't posted this story on ff.net yet--sorry. Pleas keep reading. It's going to get even better.
Author's Response: I know this is gonna sound silly, but in the first three movies Rupert (who plays Ron) whenever he'd say Harry's name it would sound like 'Arry to me...so when I' writing that who I picture as Ron and so therefore that's how I write him. I apologize if it bothers you, but...well, does it make too much difference? Does it ruin the story? I don't think so, anyway. Does that explain things better?
Author's Response: No, Lily will be fine. I just couldn't have them hash everything out in one chapter...for the most part this story will focus on Harry and Severus. Lily, since she has to stay in the hospital awhile, will get to act as a 'sounding board' as it were for the two of them. She can offer advice to Severus about how to handle Harry's more rambuncious side and tell Harry more about the side of Severus *she* knows. Does that make since? And yes, Severus and Lily will be talking soon about the whole 'why didn't you tell me' thing. Just keep reading. I think you'll be pleased. |
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