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Title: The Unusual Detention 12 Jun 2011 7:47 am
Reviewer: Jyllian (Signed) [Report This]
    I can't find this story on fanfiction.net...I think I like it so far, hard to tell...

    Author's Response:

    I haven't posted this story on ff.net yet--sorry. Pleas keep reading. It's going to get even better.

Title: The Unusual Detention 12 Jun 2011 7:33 am
Reviewer: Rosa_Sweet (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely chapter, one question though- why doesn't Ron pronounce his 'h's? In the books he always did

    Author's Response: I know this is gonna sound silly, but in the first three movies Rupert (who plays Ron) whenever he'd say Harry's name it would sound like 'Arry to me...so when I' writing that who I picture as Ron and so therefore that's how I write him. I apologize if it bothers you, but...well, does it make too much difference? Does it ruin the story? I don't think so, anyway. Does that explain things better?
Title: The Unusual Detention 12 Jun 2011 6:32 am
Reviewer: Twilight1987 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ahhhhh!!!!! I can't believe Harry had to leave! That was sad! Nothing is going to happen to Lily is it? I mean she JUST woke up! When is she gonna find out that Sev knows Harry is his? And obvisouly, Lily loves Sev.... Ahhh! That was an awesome chapter! I hope you update soon.... Also... I mean, Sev practically told her that he knew Harry was his.... Hmmmm.... Well, great job and looking forward to the rest!

    Author's Response: No, Lily will be fine. I just couldn't have them hash everything out in one chapter...for the most part this story will focus on Harry and Severus. Lily, since she has to stay in the hospital awhile, will get to act as a 'sounding board' as it were for the two of them. She can offer advice to Severus about how to handle Harry's more rambuncious side and tell Harry more about the side of Severus *she* knows. Does that make since? And yes, Severus and Lily will be talking soon about the whole 'why didn't you tell me' thing. Just keep reading. I think you'll be pleased.
Title: The Unusual Detention 12 Jun 2011 6:27 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    :-)

    No Kiss from a handsom Prince (or a hooked nosed one either) to wake this sleeping beauty--no, just a single tear from her little boy!

    Loved it!
    V.
Title: The Unusual Detention 12 Jun 2011 6:26 am
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Love it. Update soon :)
Title: A Relative Matter 11 Jun 2011 3:59 am
Reviewer: Judy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome - I can't wait for the next chapter!
Title: A Relative Matter 11 Jun 2011 12:38 am
Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow! Super chapter! It must be a shock for Severus and Harry. I'm curious if Harry and Draco will be friends..and how it will take Ron - because Ron can be sometimes a real prat.
Title: Prologue: The Cottage 10 Jun 2011 6:19 pm
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    'time armorial...it's 'time immemorial'
Title: A Relative Matter 10 Jun 2011 3:43 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I really liked the potions class and the comments about Goyle and Neville blowing up the castle. I also think it's a good idea to have Slytherin partner Gryffindor there, that way they won't attempt to ruin each other's potions. I liked the way Sev explained the potion to Hermione, it was well done.

    So was the explanation about Severus' past and his parents. I had a feeling that Tobias was the cause of Eileen's death. Poor Severus, stuck with the corrupt Malfoys! I am glad that Lily forgave him and got help, although if Dumbledore was there, he could have stopped Sev's fall with that spell he used on Harry at the Quidditch match. Why didn't he just throw a Body Bind on Severus?
    I'm glad the cousins know the truth now.

    I noticed one mistake. Severus is speaking about Tobias and says,

    You also began to drink—and when he was drunk he could be very mean and hurtful.

    It should be "he" also began to drink.

    Will Lily wake up next chapter?
Title: A Relative Matter 10 Jun 2011 10:23 am
Reviewer: Lilyflower5 (Signed) [Report This]
    so looks like lily is finilly wakeing up i'm glad that snape found out ealy harry is his son please update very soon this is really good story i'd love to see it commpleated

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