Wow, what a shocker chapter! I like the story even more now!
Great chapter! There were a few spelling errors, though. I take it that Lily will wake up soon. Will the cousins become friends? When will Harry tell Ron and Hermione? Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
| Title: A Relative Matter
| 10 Jun 2011 5:22 am
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| Reviewer: Twilight1987 (Anonymous)
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A. W. E. S. O. M. E. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Update soon, I want to know what happens next :D
This was a good chapter. I liked how Draco and Harry insulted each other and then went to find the unicorn and the disgusting vampiric Voldemort.
Loved Severus' reaction to finding them and his Animagus form was a surprise.
His discipline of Harry was fair, though I do have a question about something else mentioned in the chapter. I'll PM you with it.
I liked how Lily is becoming more aware with each chapter. I hope she wakes up soon.
| Title: The Forbidden Duel
| 08 Jun 2011 10:49 pm
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| Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous)
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| Title: The Forbidden Duel
| 08 Jun 2011 10:41 pm
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| Reviewer: Ragnhild (Anonymous)
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Good story. On a side note, corporal punishment is prohibited in British schools. "In state-run schools, and also in private schools where at least part of the funding came from government, corporal punishment was outlawed by Parliament with effect from 1987." (Source: Wikipedia) I assume that since the Ministry of Magic "intervene" at Hogwarts several times during the series, at least some of the funding for the school comes from the Ministry.
this ws well written i liked how snape wasn't overly harsh can't w8 to read more!
| Title: The Troll and the Lily
| 07 Jun 2011 8:23 pm
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| Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous)
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Brilliant chapter and I'm looking forward to reading more
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