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Title: The Troll and the Lily 07 Jun 2011 7:23 pm
Reviewer: DestinedMommy (Signed) [Report This]
    wow this is so interesting!! im really excited to read wat happens nxt update soon!!!
Title: Memories 06 Jun 2011 5:59 pm
Reviewer: DestinedMommy (Signed) [Report This]
    this is amazing...and soo sad i enjoyed reading ths it was brilliant! u update really fast :) keep up the marvelous wrk!!
Title: Memories 06 Jun 2011 2:45 pm
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love the story and the new chapters and I cannot wait for more... I would love to see if Lily will wake from her coma and how Severus will act towards Harry.
Title: Memories 06 Jun 2011 10:20 am
Reviewer: Zireael07 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, wow, I can't wait to see more, the story is getting better by the minute!

    Yay! Lily! I love Lily going back stories!
Title: On the Wrong foot 06 Jun 2011 2:39 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    That was very interesting. About Lucius being Severus' older half-brother. I don't think I've seen that done before. Nice twist! You know the old saying, Satan was Christ's elder brother? The same could apply to Lucius and Sev.

    I'm glad Severus is keeping a firm hand and eye on Malfoy, because somebody has to. I wonder what Severus' reaction will be to finding out he was right about Mcgonagall putting Harry on the team?

    And yay, Lily is starting to wake up!
Title: It Begins 06 Jun 2011 2:27 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, this was a most puzzling chapter. How could Harry be James's son when Lily was married to Severus? Did they get divorced? Go under cover or something? I'll bet the meddling old coot in the office had something to do with that.

    If Harry is Sev's son, why doesn't Severus remember that? Possibly a Memory Charm?

    Lily is alive and in a coma, but why did Petunia get Harry if he's Severus' son?
    I have many questions . . . and hope I'll get some answers as the story goes on.

    Oh, and one other thing, why does Ron have a broad Cockney accent? It almost reminded me of Eliza Dolittle in My Fair Lady.
Title: On the Wrong foot 06 Jun 2011 2:23 am
Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like the chapter but there were a few things I had a problem with. I am fine with Severus and Draco being half-brothers. However, I didn't like how you changed character names and ages. There are five years of age between Lucius and Severus. Draco's middle name is Lucius and Lucius' father is named Abraxas.

    Author's Response: Glad you liked the story, and I'm sorry the changes bothered you...but this is an AU (alternate universe) after all. I am afriad I am not as well versed in the tinier details of the Harry Potter world as some. I hope you will continue to read the story, anyway. Thanks again for the review.
Title: Prologue: The Cottage 06 Jun 2011 2:21 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    This was a good chapter. i liked the idea of this cottage beside the Muggle village. I also liked how Lily and Severus were married and that Severus wanted lots of kids. I agree with Lily, he'd be a good father.

    I was surprised that Lily was urging him to a reconciliaton with his father. That's a touchy subject, because obviously Severus was very hurt whenTobias became an alcoholic. I'm assuming Eileen died in that car crash? That's a hell of a thing for a son to forgive his father for. And whle I understand that Lily wants them to be a family again, it's still a very very sore subject. I can see why Severus is reluctant to forgive the man, and even though Tobias is technically paying for his crime, I think Severus will ever feel it's enough, since he took away Eileen from him.

    I think Severus should be allowed to make up his own mind if and when he wishes to reconcile, because pushing him to do so will only cause resentment and anger.

    It could take years, as I know all too well, since I had a family member who was an alcoholic for years and wrecked his marriage and it took his wife and kids years to trust and reconcile with him after he finally decided to quit the bottle for good.

    I liked that Lily is supposed to be a teacher too.
Title: It Begins 05 Jun 2011 11:03 pm
Reviewer: Kezzasilver (Signed) [Report This]
    I love your stories. I can't wait to follow this one
Title: It Begins 05 Jun 2011 10:15 pm
Reviewer: tabbycat (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hi!
    Ooh! I'm curious as to what's gone on! Is Harry James' son?? And Lily survived? Hope you update again soon. :)

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