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Reviews For A First Time for Everything
Yay! Lily! I love Lily going back stories!
I'm glad Severus is keeping a firm hand and eye on Malfoy, because somebody has to. I wonder what Severus' reaction will be to finding out he was right about Mcgonagall putting Harry on the team? And yay, Lily is starting to wake up!
If Harry is Sev's son, why doesn't Severus remember that? Possibly a Memory Charm? Lily is alive and in a coma, but why did Petunia get Harry if he's Severus' son? I have many questions . . . and hope I'll get some answers as the story goes on. Oh, and one other thing, why does Ron have a broad Cockney accent? It almost reminded me of Eliza Dolittle in My Fair Lady.
Author's Response: Glad you liked the story, and I'm sorry the changes bothered you...but this is an AU (alternate universe) after all. I am afriad I am not as well versed in the tinier details of the Harry Potter world as some. I hope you will continue to read the story, anyway. Thanks again for the review.
I was surprised that Lily was urging him to a reconciliaton with his father. That's a touchy subject, because obviously Severus was very hurt whenTobias became an alcoholic. I'm assuming Eileen died in that car crash? That's a hell of a thing for a son to forgive his father for. And whle I understand that Lily wants them to be a family again, it's still a very very sore subject. I can see why Severus is reluctant to forgive the man, and even though Tobias is technically paying for his crime, I think Severus will ever feel it's enough, since he took away Eileen from him. I think Severus should be allowed to make up his own mind if and when he wishes to reconcile, because pushing him to do so will only cause resentment and anger. It could take years, as I know all too well, since I had a family member who was an alcoholic for years and wrecked his marriage and it took his wife and kids years to trust and reconcile with him after he finally decided to quit the bottle for good. I liked that Lily is supposed to be a teacher too.
Ooh! I'm curious as to what's gone on! Is Harry James' son?? And Lily survived? Hope you update again soon. :) |
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