| Title: A Family They Never Had
| 12 Aug 2012 3:47 am
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| Reviewer: PamPam (Signed)
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hello, I registered just so sorry if your comment only now history. I must say I really like the first chapter. the only thing I regret is that Harry has his mother's eyes well, but better to have inherited from Severus eyes instead of your nose ^ _ ^ ... compliments
Wow, what a brilliant beginning!! I can't wait to read more. *rub my hands in delightful anticipation*
Wow, the theory about their memories is brilliant and somehow I hope that they'll stay in that reality.
Your Melfis.
Awesome concept! I can see lots of angst in the future between Harry and Snape! And I'm also wondering if this isn't all a dream caused by that spell?
| Title: A Family They Never Had
| 23 Jun 2011 10:59 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Interesting start thank you
NICE! Refreshing kind of story-but please bring back Harry's scar (Severus can be without his dark mark) but Harry isn't our Harry without his very famous lightning scar!
| Title: A Family They Never Had
| 22 Jun 2011 4:05 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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OOh, this story is intriguing. I can't wait to read more.
I really am happy for Harry and Sev, even though they have alot of work to do.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
| Title: A Family They Never Had
| 22 Jun 2011 3:52 am
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| Reviewer: dsdicnds (Anonymous)
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I can't help but be suspicious that actually, a Djinn has attacked them and that they are currently dreaming about a life that they desire. I hope their blood isn't being sucked!
I have to admit I'm very very into this story and I really want you to update soon please! I'm dying to know what happens next! This was a well written chapter and I'm really looking forward to reading the next one!
| Title: A Family They Never Had
| 22 Jun 2011 12:58 am
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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OH veryu interesting More please!
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