| Title: A Routine to Follow and Life to Lead
| 12 Aug 2012 6:21 am
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| Reviewer: PamPam (Signed)
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Harry if they have not yet realized but his "play the game" is doing to change Severus ... I'm curious to know how it goes on ... compliments, nice chapter.
sorry my english not good.
Wheew, I'm more than happy that James and Sirius aren't jerks, in fact I like them really well in your story! And oh my God, Harry pulling Sev into that shop was soooo adorable!!!
I wonder, if Snape will ever see what Harry is so desperate to gain... even if it has to be togetehr with our beloved Potions master?
Please, keep up the formidable work!!
Your Melfis.
Oh my god. Please tell me you're going to put this on the top of your update list. Please please please. I need more, especially when i'm depressed as hell, what with my sem finals comin up.
Severus had me going 'aw' the whole way through. I could literally feel the pain and longing radiating off him. (And the longing for more radiating off me) And the quill scene... If you're aiming to kill me with all those sweet-gruff-I'm-not-showing-my-emotions Sev moments, yes, you succeeded.
I love the last sentence. It makes me yearn for more, especially now they're both left alone. And it makes me so so so sad to see Sev yearning for so much and yet, couldn't do a thing about that insecurity of his.
Awesome awesome writing. Please, update soon? I'll give you a tropical quill? :)
Author's Response: Haha, actually, it's is. I don't why why, but inspiration and ideas are just flowing for this fic. I have to work on my prompt fic, but than I'll be right back to writing more and sending chapters off to my beta once she's had a break from her own RL stress :P
I'm really thrilled you liked those scenes and the fic. I can't give anything away yet, but I can say you'll like some of the developement occuring as soon as the next chapter. Thank you SO much for your review! :D I will update again as soon as I can.
i like this story! can't wait for the update
They're both confused aren't they? I hope this week provides a good deal of bonding time for the two of them!
Hmm..things seem to be progressing, rather slowly but that's to be expected. The last line was awesome though, I can't wait to read more!
I'm a bit emotional today but this chapter was so sweet it had me in tears. This story is awesome and I can't wait to read the update.
| Title: A Routine to Follow and Life to Lead
| 24 Apr 2012 11:42 am
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| Reviewer: hazpotsfan (Signed)
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Yayy an update :) This was such a cute chapter!
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