Title: Chapter 2
| 09 Jul 2011 10:18 am
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Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous)
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I really like this story. Can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Chapter 2
| 09 Jul 2011 7:17 am
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Reviewer: Helene (Anonymous)
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Good Job!
Excellent writing. I can easily put myself in the story with the visual and emotional cues. I like the twist of Severus working at the post office and I am looking forward to seeing where you take this story.
Title: Chapter 2
| 09 Jul 2011 7:15 am
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Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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hmm nterestng want to see more soon please thank you .... So harry traveled to the past and sev is going to contact the headmaster.
Title: Chapter 1
| 06 Jul 2011 9:50 am
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Reviewer: leanne (Anonymous)
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good beginning, curious to see what you have planned to happed.
Not that I don't want Harry to disappear but will Severus and Lily be getting together or will Severus be saving Lily and baby harry in the future?
ahh well, I'm looking forward to whatever it is you will be writing anyway.
Title: Chapter 1
| 05 Jul 2011 12:30 am
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved this runaway and time travelling story thank you
Hi there, great first chapter!! It was very cute and I'm happy that Severus is not actually a death eater in this one... could have become quite difficult otherwise. ^^" I'm most curious if Harry actually did a time travel, although I suspect it as he would normally be younger considerĂng Snape's age. PLease, continue soon, your Melfis.
Title: Chapter 1
| 04 Jul 2011 4:31 pm
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Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous)
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I love the story and I would love to read more and see were ther see were the story leads to.
Wow, Severus is so young to be a guardian to Harry, but he seems like he would be a better one than the Dursleys. Good job, and interesting twist.
Title: Chapter 1
| 03 Jul 2011 9:32 pm
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Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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I think this is a great start and intriguing idea. Write on!
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