| Title: Toy Store Drama
| 28 Jul 2011 10:07 pm
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| Reviewer: projectjay (Anonymous)
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treat them as children they have to grow up all over again and Sirius just earned a spanking in my book.
| Title: Toy Store Drama
| 18 Jul 2011 12:26 am
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| Reviewer: LeeRoy (Anonymous)
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Can't wait for more. Update as soon as you can.
Author's Response: I just updated the next chapter, so it should be up shortly! Thanks for your review!
| Title: Toy Store Drama
| 17 Jul 2011 8:11 pm
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| Reviewer: dosia (Anonymous)
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Hey!
Although I read fanfiction for over 2 years have not met yet with the idea that You used in your story: D It is a big plus, and a small Severus is great. Congratulations on a beautiful devotional character and I hope that soon will be another chapter;)
The story so captivated me that I would be able to translate them in my native Polish, but with a "formal request" occurs after a few more chapters, which I can not wait: P
Yours sincerely
Dosia
| Title: Toy Store Drama
| 17 Jul 2011 8:17 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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You have a funny story brewing heree, looking forward to moree....little dissapointed that your penname is twilightt on a harry potter sitee... shhame good story though :D
Author's Response: I hate that you don't like my name... Lol oh well. I put a reason behind my name in the next chapter which should be up shortly. Thanks for the review!
I love this premise so much. xD
Sirius deserves a spanking, little brat--is he gonna get it through his head any time soon that he can't act like that? ;)
I really really like this idea! Please keep writing. I'll be anxiously awaiting the next chapter!
| Title: Toy Store Drama
| 16 Jul 2011 12:55 am
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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oh very nice I feel for sev and sir needa a spanking!
yay.... must spank Sirius... hehe
This was great! I love little Sev ( Severus has always been my favorite character). I can't wait for the next chapter... I know what you mean though my weekend is booked! I'm going to see Harry potter and the deathly hallows part 2 in only 4 hours! Wahoo!
By the way I'm the one who reviewed as Jordan with the "freaking awesome comment" haha
| Title: Toy Store Drama
| 14 Jul 2011 11:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Ehann (Anonymous)
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Oh I like this beginning! Very promising!
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