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you will take the answer you have been given, okay?” Sirius asked him calmly and steadily. I think that Sirius should read Harry. Very good though, Lucyx Author's Response: Thanks! Someone else said the same thing and I was unable to find it... I will look again since you have given me a bit more to go on. Thanks for your review!
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That was rather a foolish thing to do Severus, will he ever learn to embrace his child-like complex now? Good chapter Author's Response: Just updated! It isn't showing up, so I thought I'd let you know! Thanks for your review!
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Since Sev brewed it correctly, they can give it to Poppy. Sirius is learning but Severus needs to find out that he can go to his "parents" Author's Response: Just updated! It isn't showing up, so I thought I'd let you know! Thanks for your review!
Just thought I'd point out a couple of mistakes. One I found hilarious but anyway... 'Sirius asked him calmly and steadily.' - you mean 'Harry'. And, 'knock before walking into any closed door' Lololol!! ;) Sorry, know how boring proofreading is! Author's Response: Haha thanks! I didn't really proofread this as much as I normally would, as, ironically, I was proofreading a paper for class lol... Thanks for your review!
Author's Response: Yes... But he still has his memories... I laughed out loud, however, when I write that because I could just imagine a little Sev trying to brew a portion! Lol thanks for your review!
Author's Response: Lol it shouldn't be too long. Perhaps Saturdayish... I'm glad you enjoy it. You pretty much always the first to review! Lol |
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