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Title: Dreamless Sleep 24 Jul 2011 5:29 pm
Reviewer: LucySnapeDaughter-Of-Snape (Signed) [Report This]
    great chapter :) however I think that there is a mistake here :-
    you will take the answer you have been given, okay?” Sirius asked him calmly and steadily.
    I think that Sirius should read Harry.
    Very good though,
    Lucyx

    Author's Response: Thanks! Someone else said the same thing and I was unable to find it... I will look again since you have given me a bit more to go on. Thanks for your review!
Title: Dreamless Sleep 21 Jul 2011 8:36 pm
Reviewer: Shadowhalls (Signed) [Report This]
    Wahoo! Torally can't wait for the next one!

    Author's Response: Just updated! It isn't showing up, so I thought I'd let you know! Thanks for your review!
Title: Dreamless Sleep 21 Jul 2011 6:02 pm
Reviewer: Rosa_Sweet (Signed) [Report This]
    Well there you go...

    That was rather a foolish thing to do Severus, will he ever learn to embrace his child-like complex now?

    Good chapter

    Author's Response: Just updated! It isn't showing up, so I thought I'd let you know! Thanks for your review!
Title: Dreamless Sleep 21 Jul 2011 4:31 pm
Reviewer: Whitsnitch91 (Signed) [Report This]
    awe, that broke my heart. I wonder how long it will take Severus to open up and learn to trust, and just give in to what he longs for most!

    Author's Response: Just updated! It isn't showing up, so I thought I'd let you know! Thanks for your review!
Title: Dreamless Sleep 21 Jul 2011 3:23 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Nifty.

    Since Sev brewed it correctly, they can give it to Poppy.

    Sirius is learning but Severus needs to find out that he can go to his "parents"

    Author's Response: Just updated! It isn't showing up, so I thought I'd let you know! Thanks for your review!
Title: Dreamless Sleep 21 Jul 2011 1:06 pm
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Severus. Like Sirius and Teddy's interactions - could we be looking at two weasley 'twins' again??
    Just thought I'd point out a couple of mistakes. One I found hilarious but anyway...
    'Sirius asked him calmly and steadily.' - you mean 'Harry'.

    And,

    'knock before walking into any closed door' Lololol!! ;)
    Sorry, know how boring proofreading is!

    Author's Response: Haha thanks! I didn't really proofread this as much as I normally would, as, ironically, I was proofreading a paper for class lol... Thanks for your review!
Title: Dreamless Sleep 21 Jul 2011 12:10 pm
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh Poor Sev!!!!!!!! More pleaee *S*
Title: Dreamless Sleep 21 Jul 2011 8:23 am
Reviewer: someone71 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I rarely review but you have me hooked. I've seen stories where Sev in smaller butter never one with both. I love your premise hope that you continue.
Title: Dreamless Sleep 21 Jul 2011 7:34 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    this was almost surreal. a young severus brewing a dreamless sleep poition...at 5!

    Author's Response: Yes... But he still has his memories... I laughed out loud, however, when I write that because I could just imagine a little Sev trying to brew a portion! Lol thanks for your review!
Title: Dreamless Sleep 21 Jul 2011 7:08 am
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Update soon. :D

    Author's Response: Lol it shouldn't be too long. Perhaps Saturdayish... I'm glad you enjoy it. You pretty much always the first to review! Lol

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