The child in him, however, was quite upset at the fact that he had disobeyed his Ginny and Harry.
*squees*
Aww! It's so sweet that Severus is so fond of Ginny. I feel like I can picture all of this happening. Awesome. :)
| Title: Disciplining Severus
| 26 Jul 2011 11:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Elena (Signed)
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Loved it!!!!
I really like little Sev and the way he is acting.
I'm looking forward for Hogwarts, will Sev meet Headmaster Snape's portrait?
I'm your reader number one!
Elena
Author's Response: Thanks! And, the next update will be up tomorrow! =)
| Title: Disciplining Severus
| 26 Jul 2011 7:16 am
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| Reviewer: April (Anonymous)
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I am enjoying your story. I like the consistent discipline. I hope Sev opens himself up to Harry soon. Can't wait for your update
This is a really neat story! Finally something different! I really hope Sev will let Harry bond with him!
Love it!
| Title: Disciplining Severus
| 23 Jul 2011 5:06 am
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| Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous)
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I feel bad for both Severus and Harry. Sev just can't accept that he is not an adult anymore. I hope that Severus will open up to Harry sooner rather than later. I love how little Alby didn't want "Sevy" to "cwy".
I got late in reviewing due to comp problems, darn. Poor Harry. And Poor Sev. Update soon.
Severus is so adorable! I do feel bad for Harry though and I can't wait to see what you have planned next!
| Title: Disciplining Severus
| 22 Jul 2011 9:35 pm
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| Reviewer: Badgerlady (Anonymous)
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CP is one thing, and Harry and Ginny handle it reasonably in this story, but it's just cruel to expect a child to eat before a session like that, even if he'd only been looking forward to a lecture, and even if Severus didn't have his special circumstances to cope with. If they recognized that, and apologized to him for it, it might increase his trust.
Generally well done, though. I'm looking forward to seeing how this develops.
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