that was a simply beautiful chapter thank you so much for taking my views into consideration it feels realyl great to know that there are some authors that actually listen and do something when their reviewers respond with their views i really enjoyed this cute fluffy chapter and i really hope that there's more to come please update soon!!
| Title: Those Mac & Cheese Kinda Conversations
| 14 Aug 2011 3:56 pm
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| Reviewer: Rosa_Sweet (Signed)
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That was adorable, I absolutely loved the bonding between Severus and Harry. So sweet!
I can't wait till Christmas! Is there going to be a big get-together at Grandma Molly's house?
Author's Response: Would it be Christmas without it, lol? Thanks for the review!
| Title: Those Mac & Cheese Kinda Conversations
| 14 Aug 2011 6:42 am
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| Reviewer: Shadowhalls (Signed)
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Awwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!! So cute! I loved it! I loved it! I loved it! This chapter was amazing and so cute. Anyway.... since you didn't seem to mind when I pointed out some mistakes last time I thought I'd let you know I found a teeny tiny little error in the first paragraph: "Sirius Arthur Black-Potter was quite sorry that he had decided to act up in Diagon Alley when all was said and done. He may have, possibly, been able to get away with what he had done had he been Neville or Luna, but not his Mum." I think maybe you meant "had he been *with* Neville or Luna" but I could be wrong. Haha Did I mention that I loved this chapter? ;)
Author's Response: Haha thanks! I actually meant -had *it* been- and I will fix it soon. I don't mind your showing me these corrections at all! Especially since you do it in a nice way and arent hateful about it. And it makes it easy to fix when I know exactly where it is. I'm super glad you like this chapter! I wasn't sure how well it would be received lol... Of course I always feel that way! Lol thanks again... And like I said, toucan always let me know when you spot stuff that is awkward or wrong! =)
| Title: Those Mac & Cheese Kinda Conversations
| 14 Aug 2011 5:56 am
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| Reviewer: Slegend (Signed)
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Fantastic Chapter! Again, love the Sev/Harry fluffly moments!
| Title: Those Mac & Cheese Kinda Conversations
| 14 Aug 2011 5:37 am
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| Reviewer: txn (Signed)
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you can't post fast enough for me! can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Lol thanks. I post as fast as I can get them written... I have one more week before I have to go to school, so I am trying to get as much written as possible.
| Title: Those Mac & Cheese Kinda Conversations
| 14 Aug 2011 4:06 am
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| Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed)
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I knew that that was what Sirius did. He needs to learn that there is more than just him in the household.
Glad Severus is coming around to a happier viewpoint.
Author's Response: LOL, yea Sirius is a bit stingy. It is still going to take a while before they feel all cozy and such.... thanks for the review!
| Title: Those Mac & Cheese Kinda Conversations
| 14 Aug 2011 3:03 am
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| Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed)
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Sweet Love it. Update soon :)
Author's Response: Thanks!
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