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Reviews For Backwards
the chapter is wonderful, of course! About the picture, I'm sorry it's taking me so long but i'm at the seaside and I haven't got a scanner here. Fortunately I have a friend who does have one and he let me scan the picture but he hasn't sent me the data yet. I hope I'll be able to send it to you soon. Your fan, Elena
Author's Response: Don't get your hopes up too much... Lol. Five little boys, only two of them have had naps and they got up two hours early... Nah, what could go wrong lol ;)
However, my one problem is that Ginny keeps putting the boys in matching clothing. While it makes them easy to identify and angelic looking it could contribute to a repression of individuality...even different colours would be better. I suggest that you have someone like Narcissa, Hermione etc etc take Ginny aside and explain that having different colours and different styles is going to help the boys out. They can place locator charms or something on them to avoid losing the boys. This is though the only complaint you are going to hear from me. Good work, I can't wait for the next chapter. Author's Response: While I hate that they have to be dressed alike, it is somethig I've seen many mothers do... Even to their teenagers when they go out somewhere new or very very crowded. The pajamas, however, is a Christmas tradition many families have... Narcissa, Hermione, etc. Will not be the ones to talk to Ginny as it is something they themselves may do... But, Ginny will find out that not all her boys always like it. I don't feel like their individuality will be squashed because of three instances... Their individual tastes will come out more and more in the chapters to come, especially Sev's... With Alby following many of them. Ginny and Harry also wouldn't dress them alike too much because, as stated in this chapter about the shoes they all received, several of the boys wear the same sizes and she wouldn't want thing to get mixes up as some of the boys are more particular about their clothes than others. Hope this helped! Thanks for the review! =)
Author's Response: Lol yes I meant laid! Ah! And your reviews help! Tremendously! I almost always go and immediately fix what you tell me! (except once when I couldn't find what you were telling me about) I already have the next chapter written... And I will post it tomorrow! =)
I loved the chapter, you captured the childrens emotions perfectly and it gave me warmth reading it! though it's mid summer :) I'm desperately waiting for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I know...Sirius is a difficult one... Thanks for your review! |
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