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Title: Christmas Morning 09 Sep 2011 9:34 am
Reviewer: topeswin (Signed) [Report This]
    Fantastic chapter. I loved it!!
Title: Christmas Morning 18 Aug 2011 12:51 pm
Reviewer: Elena (Signed) [Report This]
    Hi,
    the chapter is wonderful, of course!
    About the picture, I'm sorry it's taking me so long but i'm at the seaside and I haven't got a scanner here. Fortunately I have a friend who does have one and he let me scan the picture but he hasn't sent me the data yet.
    I hope I'll be able to send it to you soon.

    Your fan,

    Elena
Title: Christmas Morning 17 Aug 2011 9:31 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    as if i'd expect anything else of sirius!
Title: Christmas Morning 17 Aug 2011 5:33 pm
Reviewer: DestinedMommy (Signed) [Report This]
    aww a sweet chapter! please update soon i hope there's not gonna be TOO much trouble... :D

    Author's Response: Don't get your hopes up too much... Lol. Five little boys, only two of them have had naps and they got up two hours early... Nah, what could go wrong lol ;)
Title: Christmas Morning 17 Aug 2011 9:00 am
Reviewer: Rosa_Sweet (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter as per normal and I suppose it wouldn't be an ordinary day if Sirius didn't get a particular gleam in his eye...even if it was Christmas. Harry and Ginny definitely need to squash any sibling rivalry before it turns into something big (and possibly dangerous with accidental magic).

    However, my one problem is that Ginny keeps putting the boys in matching clothing. While it makes them easy to identify and angelic looking it could contribute to a repression of individuality...even different colours would be better. I suggest that you have someone like Narcissa, Hermione etc etc take Ginny aside and explain that having different colours and different styles is going to help the boys out. They can place locator charms or something on them to avoid losing the boys. This is though the only complaint you are going to hear from me.

    Good work, I can't wait for the next chapter.

    Author's Response: While I hate that they have to be dressed alike, it is somethig I've seen many mothers do... Even to their teenagers when they go out somewhere new or very very crowded. The pajamas, however, is a Christmas tradition many families have... Narcissa, Hermione, etc. Will not be the ones to talk to Ginny as it is something they themselves may do... But, Ginny will find out that not all her boys always like it. I don't feel like their individuality will be squashed because of three instances... Their individual tastes will come out more and more in the chapters to come, especially Sev's... With Alby following many of them. Ginny and Harry also wouldn't dress them alike too much because, as stated in this chapter about the shoes they all received, several of the boys wear the same sizes and she wouldn't want thing to get mixes up as some of the boys are more particular about their clothes than others. Hope this helped! Thanks for the review! =)
Title: Christmas Morning 17 Aug 2011 5:24 am
Reviewer: Shadowhalls (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope that the next chapter comes out soon because I might just die of anticipation! I really loved this chapter and I can't wait to see what sort of mischief brews at Grammy Molly's. :D I found one mistake this time: "Severus paid his head down on her shoulder. He was quiet." I'm quite certain that you meant "laid" instead of "paid. Haha I also wanted to thank you for your oh so kind responses to my posts. They really mean alot to me.

    Author's Response: Lol yes I meant laid! Ah! And your reviews help! Tremendously! I almost always go and immediately fix what you tell me! (except once when I couldn't find what you were telling me about) I already have the next chapter written... And I will post it tomorrow! =)
Title: Christmas Morning 17 Aug 2011 1:55 am
Reviewer: Whitsnitch91 (Signed) [Report This]
    o.O... sirius will get into trouble on christmas I guess...
    I loved the chapter, you captured the childrens emotions perfectly and it gave me warmth reading it! though it's mid summer :)
    I'm desperately waiting for the next chapter!
Title: Christmas Morning 16 Aug 2011 11:07 pm
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    oh boy Sirius, update soon
Title: Christmas Morning 16 Aug 2011 10:30 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, my first instinct was no, Sirius will never learn not to be jealous. However, maybe this family will help him with learning that love increases not decreases.

    Author's Response:

    I know...Sirius is a difficult one... Thanks for your review!


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