| Title: This is the way it goes....
| 09 Sep 2011 12:10 am
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| Reviewer: topeswin (Signed)
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I could've cried at the end of this chapter, and that never happens. I'm probably going to spend all day and night reading. :)
Author's Response: Aw! Thanks! Of course... It may just get worse in the "I need to cry" area... I've had people tell that it does... =)
Awesome. Very well done. I'm so excited to read this story!!
Author's Response: I hope that you continue to like it... Unnnow that it is not everyone's cup of tea. But I love writing Sev and Sirius this way.... It's fun! =)
wanna see..... next chap..^^
Awesome stuff. I'm sorry I haven't been a very good reviewer for the last chapter but I have thoroughly enjoyed them. Whatever Harry has planned...I sure hope it works...brothers have to live with each other. I'm serious in saying that after they work out their initial problems-I'm not saying they will be perfect- I think the boys should share rooms. I grew up in a family of five and we've all shared at some points (my brother still share). It can be difficult, there will be some fighting but as long as the brothers are not going to kill each other it isn't going to be a bad thing. However it can't only be Sev and Sirius the other boys might need to share with each other (just for a bit, not forever) so it isn't seen as a punishment.
Sharing a room with one of my sisters was hellish at times but ultimately we are very close.
Great stuff!
Amazing chapter. Update soon.
I wonder what is the idea that Harry had... Brilliant chapter! Especially Sev washing his sweater...
It's no problem at all! My father passed away about 10 years ago in a car accident when I was in 1st grade; so I absolutely understand how important being with your dad is right now. Don't worry over updating just take care of your father. That's the most important thing. On a lighter note, I really loved this chapter. I feel so bad for Harry and Severus. I hope their conflict is soon resolved! :)
| Title: Harsh Realizations
| 03 Sep 2011 1:49 am
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| Reviewer: Elena (Signed)
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Hi,
the chapter is fantastic! I'm so sorry that Harry and Sev are going to be "back to step one"... I lied. I'm not sorry, I'm going to enjoy it!!!
I'm glad to hear that you liked the picture, if I draw more I'll let you know.
Your fan
Elena
P.S. Good luck for your dad, the same thing happened to my best friend's dad recently and he wasn't even 55! Now he is perfectly fine and I'm sure your dad will be, too.
Oh wow. Update soon, I hope your father is feeling better.
oh i really hope he's okay now! i'll put in a prayer if you'd like
on a happier note i enjoyed reading ur nxt chapter though i feel realy bad for poor Harry hope things get better soon im really looking 4ward to reading how the two make up again :)
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