| Title: Those Mac & Cheese Kinda Conversations
| 14 Aug 2011 6:42 am
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| Reviewer: Shadowhalls (Signed)
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Awwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!! So cute! I loved it! I loved it! I loved it! This chapter was amazing and so cute. Anyway.... since you didn't seem to mind when I pointed out some mistakes last time I thought I'd let you know I found a teeny tiny little error in the first paragraph: "Sirius Arthur Black-Potter was quite sorry that he had decided to act up in Diagon Alley when all was said and done. He may have, possibly, been able to get away with what he had done had he been Neville or Luna, but not his Mum." I think maybe you meant "had he been *with* Neville or Luna" but I could be wrong. Haha Did I mention that I loved this chapter? ;)
Author's Response: Haha thanks! I actually meant -had *it* been- and I will fix it soon. I don't mind your showing me these corrections at all! Especially since you do it in a nice way and arent hateful about it. And it makes it easy to fix when I know exactly where it is. I'm super glad you like this chapter! I wasn't sure how well it would be received lol... Of course I always feel that way! Lol thanks again... And like I said, toucan always let me know when you spot stuff that is awkward or wrong! =)
| Title: Those Mac & Cheese Kinda Conversations
| 14 Aug 2011 5:56 am
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| Reviewer: Slegend (Signed)
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Fantastic Chapter! Again, love the Sev/Harry fluffly moments!
| Title: Those Mac & Cheese Kinda Conversations
| 14 Aug 2011 5:37 am
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| Reviewer: txn (Signed)
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you can't post fast enough for me! can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Lol thanks. I post as fast as I can get them written... I have one more week before I have to go to school, so I am trying to get as much written as possible.
| Title: Those Mac & Cheese Kinda Conversations
| 14 Aug 2011 4:06 am
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| Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed)
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I knew that that was what Sirius did. He needs to learn that there is more than just him in the household.
Glad Severus is coming around to a happier viewpoint.
Author's Response: LOL, yea Sirius is a bit stingy. It is still going to take a while before they feel all cozy and such.... thanks for the review!
| Title: Those Mac & Cheese Kinda Conversations
| 14 Aug 2011 3:03 am
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| Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed)
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Sweet Love it. Update soon :)
Author's Response: Thanks!
This is such a great chapter! I'm really enjoying how you're keeping Sev and Sirius so in character yet still showing how thay are adapting to their new situation.
I can hardly wait to see what little Siri did. :-)
This was such a cute chapter! I loved it! I found 2 mistakes though (I don't mean to be picky and I know how annoying computers and iPhones are.... always trying to fix your spelling, hence turning words into everything and anything except what you meant them to be) *glares at laptop*
"As soon as they dup sat down, Severus crawled out of the chair that his father had placed him in and then climbed into Harry’s lap, one let on each side of Harry with his stomach against his, and laid his head on his Daddy’s chest."
In the first sentence you have the word "dup". I think you might have meant "had". You also have "let" instead of "leg".
Anyway I don't mean to be picky; ignore me if you wish ;) just thought I'd bring them to your attention
Author's Response: Lol no you are not being picky... And since you were so accurate and actually showed menwhere it was, it will be much easier to fix. So, thanks! =)Also, thanks for the review!
I enjoyed this chapter and the Harry/Sev moments. I can't wait to see what everyone got for Christmas. I wonder what Sirius did.
| Title: Christmas Shopping
| 12 Aug 2011 4:00 pm
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| Reviewer: Elena (Signed)
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Wonderful chapter!
Poor Sirius, is he going to end on the naughty list?
Anyway, I love this fic so much that I made a picture of little Sevy with his snake, would you like to see it? If you wish i could send it via email.
Let me know.
Your fan number one,
Elena
Author's Response: I would LOVE to see it! Thanks for the review!
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