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Reviews For Backwards
I think you did an excellent job with Pansy's story and I hope that Severus can move on and enjoy childhood now. I'm so happy that he's beginning to recognise Harry as a father :) Your writing is really improving. It reads much more clearly than only a few chapters ago! Keep it up!
Like Severus - damn Dumbledore. You don't use children to fight a war.
Author's Response: Thanks! I am working on the next chapter... there is just a lot going on in the chapter. It will be up in a few days though! =)
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