I live this chapter and the fact that Severus is named after Harry. Update quickly please!
| Title: The Changing of the Names
| 05 Aug 2011 3:43 pm
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| Reviewer: Badgerlady (Anonymous)
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Couple of editorial notes--I don't think "insipid" is the word you want to describe Sirius's eyes, unless you mean to say they're bland, weak, and uninteresting. I imagine the word you were looking for is "limpid" (deep, clear, liquid). Also, this may have been a typo, but note that Ginny's name is Ginevra, not Ginerva.(It may help to remember that it's a form of Guinevere.)
Author's Response: You know, I looked at that word (insipid) for a LONG time before finally using... I will definitely go in and change it... The word I want to use though, since it is describing Sev's eyes has to be a pretty word... Lol it a mind thing with me...
Love it. Looking forward to more.
That was a very cute chapter but don't Harry and Ginny have their hand full. I wonder if any rivalry will emerge, will they fight over parents' time?
| Title: The Changing of the Names
| 05 Aug 2011 10:39 am
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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Oh this was so nice I love this story.
| Title: The Changing of the Names
| 05 Aug 2011 9:02 am
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| Reviewer: Slegend (Signed)
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What a sweet Chapter! I really liked the names you chose, and that they decided to include Harry's name in Severus' name. :-)
| Title: Pixie Elf
| 05 Aug 2011 1:19 am
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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Oh that was so sweet! I love the pixie elf! poor sev he will be ok...*S*
Great chapter, I think some bonding between Sev and Pansy would be particularly heart-wrenching
*gasp*! I don't like Dumbledore much; I don't understand why people do... still very nice :)
Oh dont worry, Dumbeldore was never one of my favorites. Haha. This chapter was amazing as always. I can't wait for the next chapter. Update quickly please! :)
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