Talk to meeee... loved that! :) Good one, and then Severus talking with Harry in such an open and trusting way, I just loved this chapter! Good job! Can't wait for the next one!
I seriously wonder when Sirius is going to either freak out on Sev again or when he will finally see sense!
GAH!!! I love this story so much! I think I must be going crazy checking for an update every time I happen by some wifi! You're an amazing writer! Everything just flows so smoothly and you somehow manage to make everything seem so believable!
| Title: Two Steps Backwards, One Step Forward
| 28 Jul 2011 3:00 am
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| Reviewer: Slegend (Signed)
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Awww....such a heart warming ending! Loved it!
| Title: Two Steps Backwards, One Step Forward
| 28 Jul 2011 2:42 am
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| Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed)
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Awww! How cute! This was a sweet (but kinda short) chapter. I'm so interested in where you're going with this fic, please continue it soon! :D
Author's Response: I know that it was short....sorry about that! But no worries, I am working on the next chapter now...I had to make this one short because the next one is going to be a longer one....I am glad that you like this so far! Thanks for your review!!!
| Title: Disciplining Severus
| 26 Jul 2011 11:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Elena (Signed)
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Loved it!!!!
I really like little Sev and the way he is acting.
I'm looking forward for Hogwarts, will Sev meet Headmaster Snape's portrait?
I'm your reader number one!
Elena
Author's Response: Thanks! And, the next update will be up tomorrow! =)
| Title: Disciplining Severus
| 26 Jul 2011 7:16 am
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| Reviewer: April (Anonymous)
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I am enjoying your story. I like the consistent discipline. I hope Sev opens himself up to Harry soon. Can't wait for your update
great chapter :) however I think that there is a mistake here :-
you will take the answer you have been given, okay?” Sirius asked him calmly and steadily.
I think that Sirius should read Harry.
Very good though,
Lucyx
Author's Response: Thanks! Someone else said the same thing and I was unable to find it... I will look again since you have given me a bit more to go on. Thanks for your review!
This is a really neat story! Finally something different! I really hope Sev will let Harry bond with him!
Love it!
| Title: Disciplining Severus
| 23 Jul 2011 5:06 am
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| Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous)
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I feel bad for both Severus and Harry. Sev just can't accept that he is not an adult anymore. I hope that Severus will open up to Harry sooner rather than later. I love how little Alby didn't want "Sevy" to "cwy".
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