I got late in reviewing due to comp problems, darn. Poor Harry. And Poor Sev. Update soon.
Severus is so adorable! I do feel bad for Harry though and I can't wait to see what you have planned next!
| Title: Disciplining Severus
| 22 Jul 2011 9:35 pm
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| Reviewer: Badgerlady (Anonymous)
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CP is one thing, and Harry and Ginny handle it reasonably in this story, but it's just cruel to expect a child to eat before a session like that, even if he'd only been looking forward to a lecture, and even if Severus didn't have his special circumstances to cope with. If they recognized that, and apologized to him for it, it might increase his trust.
Generally well done, though. I'm looking forward to seeing how this develops.
Wahoo! Torally can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: Just updated! It isn't showing up, so I thought I'd let you know! Thanks for your review!
Well there you go...
That was rather a foolish thing to do Severus, will he ever learn to embrace his child-like complex now?
Good chapter
Author's Response: Just updated! It isn't showing up, so I thought I'd let you know! Thanks for your review!
awe, that broke my heart. I wonder how long it will take Severus to open up and learn to trust, and just give in to what he longs for most!
Author's Response: Just updated! It isn't showing up, so I thought I'd let you know! Thanks for your review!
Nifty.
Since Sev brewed it correctly, they can give it to Poppy.
Sirius is learning but Severus needs to find out that he can go to his "parents"
Author's Response: Just updated! It isn't showing up, so I thought I'd let you know! Thanks for your review!
Poor Severus. Like Sirius and Teddy's interactions - could we be looking at two weasley 'twins' again??
Just thought I'd point out a couple of mistakes. One I found hilarious but anyway...
'Sirius asked him calmly and steadily.' - you mean 'Harry'.
And,
'knock before walking into any closed door' Lololol!! ;)
Sorry, know how boring proofreading is!
Author's Response: Haha thanks! I didn't really proofread this as much as I normally would, as, ironically, I was proofreading a paper for class lol... Thanks for your review!
| Title: Dreamless Sleep
| 21 Jul 2011 12:10 pm
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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Oh Poor Sev!!!!!!!! More pleaee *S*
| Title: Dreamless Sleep
| 21 Jul 2011 8:23 am
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| Reviewer: someone71 (Anonymous)
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I rarely review but you have me hooked. I've seen stories where Sev in smaller butter never one with both. I love your premise hope that you continue.
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