grt going. write quik. am waiting. 10/10
Nice chapter, but Ginny's name is Ginevra, r after the v.
Author's Response: Thanks! And it's just a misspelling... From typing too fast. If I ever get back to the computer and remember, I will fix it.. Lol
I have the feeling that I'm not the only one who had an evil, maniacal grin on their face when Ginny said "I want to see him." I could barely refrain from bouncing in my seat. Muah-ha-ha-ha-ha.
Ahh man. Harry just had to spoil my fun. Even if he was right, he still spoiled my fun. Yeah, yeah, Severus is more important than revenge... Oops, I mean justice.
Good job Minerva of keeping Dumbledore in line and keeping him hidden for now.
Loved the visit from Lily although now we see where Harry gets his reasoning skills.
Great ending of the chapter. All the Potters together, as one big happy family. Nice touch.
Author's Response: Thanks! =) I am hoping that you all won't have to wait too long for an update!=)
Now THAT was a brilliant chapter!!!!!
Author's Response: Ah really? I was really not sure about it and nearly didn't post it. Thanks! =)
Looking forward to more
Author's Response: Thanks! It should pick up speed soon! I have to get a major final paper written before I can write anymore, but after that, I believe that I will be able to pick up speed a bit=)
nice. keep up the great work!
Yeah harry! but you should have hexed him MUCH harder!
Sighz Ive liked the story so far. But I hate how negatively dumbledore is being portrayed. I really think mcgonnagol and Harry would have remembered him fondly. But it Iss your story so we
For any other person, Lily's comments followed so soon by Harry's would have been sufficient. However the great Albus Dumbledore has to be different.
Poor Severus. The monster of his dreams showed up at the one place he really needed to feel safe. Of course, it could have been worse and he could have come to the Potter's house.
Oh my!! He's going to be in such a world of hurt when he wakes up. Minerva is really ticked off. And then it's going to get even worse for him when Ginny arrives. *evil cackle*
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