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Title: Chapter 1: That's What He Was... 22 Jan 2013 12:29 am
Reviewer: kspence (Signed) [Report This]
    Chapter is very good, I look forward to reading more, I saw how many reviews this story has received and thought it must be good, and it is.
Title: Chapter 1: That's What He Was... 26 Feb 2012 5:47 am
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry!
Title: Chapter 1: That's What He Was... 11 Jul 2011 11:08 pm
Reviewer: b.nolea (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Just a plot bunny that just jumped into my head: What if Harry is the one being bullied on the Quidditch Pitch during the first flying lesson, and Neville is the one who stands up for him?
Title: Chapter 1: That's What He Was... 11 Jul 2011 8:31 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This sounds like an awesome start. I can't wait to see where you go with this story. Update soon (:
Title: Chapter 1: That's What He Was... 11 Jul 2011 1:37 pm
Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed) [Report This]
    awwww poorHarry nad Snape is defintly npt helping that is for sure
Title: Chapter 1: That's What He Was... 11 Jul 2011 5:07 am
Reviewer: Natasi (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes, definitely continue, the beginning is very promising and you can go a lot of different directions.

    I am thinking that since voldemort is truly dead, Dumbledore will be quite unconcerned with Harry's welfare. He may even start to see him in a negative light being that he is in slytherin and will probably even be reminded of Tom riddle.

    I like how you set Harry up with a very deeply ingrained negative self-perception. He apparently thinks that his relatives are right and he deserves to be treated harshly, I think you should really keep harry in that mindset for awhile. I foresee a lot of self-injury due to his internalized negativity. Ooh, a scene just popped in my head. Dumbledore mistakes Harry's self injurious behaviour as violence directed at others. For example, he sees a bit of blood on Harry's shirt and instead of realizing that it is Harry's, he assumes that it is either someone else's or that harry hurt an animal, thus fueling his future dark lord theory.

    I don't know how I came up with all of that from a 980 word beginning, but for some reason, you caused my plot bunny to give birth to a litter of baby plot bunnies.

    Author's Response: Oh, I LOVE that idea, you are brilliant...EVILLY brilliant. xD I never like when Harry realizes right off that what his relatives have been doing is wrong. :3 It seems too--I don't know, too fast. After all, he's been going through this for ten years, that kind of negativity and treatment sinks into you. I really like the idea of Dumbledore getting put off by him and unconcerned. Thank you for the review and the litter of rabid plot bunnies!
Title: Chapter 1: That's What He Was... 11 Jul 2011 3:48 am
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yes the story should go on please update when you can . !!!!!!!!! POOOR HARRY!!!!!! I wonder when swev with see the real problem...

    Author's Response: Thank you! xD He will see at some point, I can promise that...but since I'm feeling evil, it might take a while. ;) Severus has quite a few misconceptions about the Boy Who Lived, after all...
Title: Chapter 1: That's What He Was... 11 Jul 2011 3:14 am
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    I think I'd like to see Snape notice Harry's odd behavior during meals and in potions class and investigate them further. Draco seems like he might be a bit of a problem so maybe play into that? Update soon. :D

    Author's Response: Thank you! I think at first he's just going to see them as evidence that Harry's a prat. I'm not sure what I want Draco to be doing yet--if he's gonna be tormenting Harry or if he's going to end up on Harry's side...probably because I haven't quite decided if the Malfoys are evil or not yet. xD
Title: Chapter 1: That's What He Was... 11 Jul 2011 3:01 am
Reviewer: Hermione (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I think that you should have one of the Slytherin's or even Neville noticing the abuse and taking it to Snape. Flint has been used in a couple of stories as being the one that discovers that Harry's been abused.

    Author's Response: I like Neville being the one...he might be. I do like the idea of someone else bringing up the abuse--although whether or not Snape follows through at first... ;) Thank you!
Title: Chapter 1: That's What He Was... 11 Jul 2011 2:36 am
Reviewer: Lizzete (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Loved it! Please continue =)

    Author's Response: Thank you! I shall. :)

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