| Title: Chapter 2: I Will Not Use My Freakishness
| 12 Jul 2011 7:07 am
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| Reviewer: Bugeyedmonster (Anonymous)
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Oops, this chapter appears to have some text repeating.
| Title: Chapter 2: I Will Not Use My Freakishness
| 12 Jul 2011 6:09 am
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| Reviewer: wynnleaf (Anonymous)
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While the writing here is good, you seriously need to check over this chapter. You have repeated whole sections of it. Seems to be a problem with cutting and pasting.
I'm not going to rate this chapter. I don't want to have to rate it low, as it should be fine once you fix the big problems with repeated paragraphs.
Author's Response: I really truly have no idea why it did that. O.o I didn't even c&p, I uploaded the file itself...weird. It -should- be fixed now, though.
| Title: Chapter 2: I Will Not Use My Freakishness
| 12 Jul 2011 5:15 am
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| Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed)
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