Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 1: That's What He Was... 11 Jul 2011 3:14 am
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    I think I'd like to see Snape notice Harry's odd behavior during meals and in potions class and investigate them further. Draco seems like he might be a bit of a problem so maybe play into that? Update soon. :D

    Author's Response: Thank you! I think at first he's just going to see them as evidence that Harry's a prat. I'm not sure what I want Draco to be doing yet--if he's gonna be tormenting Harry or if he's going to end up on Harry's side...probably because I haven't quite decided if the Malfoys are evil or not yet. xD
Title: Chapter 1: That's What He Was... 11 Jul 2011 3:01 am
Reviewer: Hermione (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I think that you should have one of the Slytherin's or even Neville noticing the abuse and taking it to Snape. Flint has been used in a couple of stories as being the one that discovers that Harry's been abused.

    Author's Response: I like Neville being the one...he might be. I do like the idea of someone else bringing up the abuse--although whether or not Snape follows through at first... ;) Thank you!
Title: Chapter 1: That's What He Was... 11 Jul 2011 2:36 am
Reviewer: Lizzete (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Loved it! Please continue =)

    Author's Response: Thank you! I shall. :)
Title: Chapter 1: That's What He Was... 11 Jul 2011 2:07 am
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, Harry. Poor baby! I'm loving this so far, I can't wait to see where you go with it!

    Author's Response: Thank you! xD I do feel bad for him, that he's internalized it all so much he even feels guilty about being glad he's at Hogwarts...he'll get better, though. Eventually.
Title: Chapter 1: That's What He Was... 11 Jul 2011 1:55 am
Reviewer: starangel2106 (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww this seems like it'll be an awesome story. I love this type (and sick Harry...) Can't wait for more.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I love this type, too, I just had to write one of my own lol.
Title: Chapter 1: That's What He Was... 11 Jul 2011 1:20 am
Reviewer: b.nolea (Anonymous) [Report This]
    An interesting idea for a story. So is Lord V. dead completly? No horcruxes, no Prof. Q. possession? Just curious.

    Author's Response: He is dead completely. I'm not quite sure what to do with Quirrell however...perhaps he could be harboring some Dark thoughts himself... ;)
Title: Chapter 1: That's What He Was... 11 Jul 2011 1:18 am
Reviewer: KB (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Me likey!
    Seriously though, it's a great start.
    Is this going to be a Munipulative!Dunbledore story? Not that I mind, just curious.
    I'm looking forward to your next update.

    Author's Response: Thank you! Hmm, I don't know if he will be manipulative, but he definitely won't be all that concerned for Harry's well-being...not since Harry's been put into Slytherin.
Title: Chapter 1: That's What He Was... 11 Jul 2011 1:10 am
Reviewer: Victoire (Signed) [Report This]
    I'd love to see Severus giving Harry detention and getting during it first thoughts that there might be something not okay with Harry family - also maybe Slytherin not liking Harry and bullying him?

    Author's Response: I think some of the Death Eater kids are definitely not happy with Harry at the moment...and he IS right there, after all...Severus will definitely be giving Harry detention, maybe even in his first Potions class [but no points off, of course, since Harry IS a Slytherin ;) ]. And thank you. :)

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