| Title: Holiday Blues
| 14 Mar 2016 2:03 pm
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| Reviewer: Abie (Signed)
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This is absolutely heart-wrenching and so painfully realistic.
| Title: Holiday Blues
| 12 Mar 2016 9:01 am
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| Reviewer: Kamitwi (Anonymous)
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Oh no! Run Harry, run! Our little Harry's going to be all traumatized and stuff! Love this chapter, delicately handled, creepy without being heavy handed, hope you update quickly!
| Title: Holiday Blues
| 12 Mar 2016 1:07 am
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| Reviewer: JWOHPfan (Anonymous)
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Great story so far. Just one thing, was it really necessary to use the f-word with Christmas? Really? Sorry but it's offensive to me and I'm sure I'm not the only one. Just saying.
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying the story. As for the swearing, I do apologize, I didn't mean to offend anyone. To be honest, I didn't even think about it, I use the f-word with... well, pretty much everything. I'm not going to change it, especially since in this case the holiday really isn't being observed religiously, but that being said, offense to any religion was definitely not intended. That's not my style. I hope it doesn't ruin anything for you, and I'll try to be a little more careful in the future. Again, thanks for reading and enjoying the story.
| Title: Holiday Blues
| 11 Mar 2016 1:33 am
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| Reviewer: rey (Anonymous)
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this story is so good... god it;s so freaking tense, I cannot wait for the next chapter, this build up is amazing
| Title: Holiday Blues
| 10 Mar 2016 10:35 pm
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| Reviewer: alexander (Anonymous)
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Thank you for the update! I loved this chapter, your writing style is amazing
| Title: Holiday Blues
| 10 Mar 2016 4:18 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Relieved it didn't go into details very well done thank you
| Title: Holiday Blues
| 10 Mar 2016 4:03 pm
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| Reviewer: Lyza (Anonymous)
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This chapter was very well done! Please post another soon
| Title: Holiday Blues
| 10 Mar 2016 3:03 pm
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| Reviewer: eh (Anonymous)
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Please Please let Snape figure out what's going on soon; and I hope Hermione lets Ron have it for what he said.
Yay another update! :-D I was just wondering earlier when the next chapter would be put up. And it's an amazing one too! Everything is really happening now!
Poor Harry. How could everything happen to him all at once like that? And on Christmas too?? Gosh I love Harry angst. This is so brilliant. And you're torturing me with Snape being so close to poking his nose in, and then deciding not to. I love it, but in a 'I slightly want to bash Snape's head into the wall to make him see and rescue Harry, but at the same time I want to see Harry suffer a bit more first' way. Does that make me a terrible person? XD Perhaps for the sake of my conscience I will perhaps just attribute it to really appreciating the plot of a very good story! So well done!
Thank you for replying to my last review by the way. I remembered to log in this time, haha.
I hope you keep riding your writing buzz, and that many more people start reading your story too. It really does deserve it!
Hope you have a good day/evening/morning (morning? Is anyone really a morning person???), or whatever time it is there when you receive this.
Again, wishing you many more reviews,
Ranger Ali.
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