| Title: Snips and Snails and Puppy Dogs' Tails
| 26 Jul 2011 8:58 pm
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| Reviewer: Delphin (Signed)
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Very well written, if I do say so myself.
The encounter with the new Professor was marvellous.
Everything so far seems to have been worded perfectly, I found myself having no trouble understanding what you were saying and every word kept me entangled in the story as Hermione with a Professor's lecture. :)
I really like this so far, bot your writing style and the way you set the scene. I particularly liked the part about Harry's names with the Dursleys versus his names in the wizarding world.
Wonderful job, please continue soon!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it since it was... well, quite boring actually. Next chapter's coming.
Where's Slytherin Harry? He's in Gryffindor, as far as I can see... but overall, good story. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: From what I understand, the Slytherin Harry warning is supposed to be used so long as either a) Harry is in Slytherin or b) Harry simply behaves more Slytherin than he does in the books... Which he will, eventually. At least I think that's right, when I went to check after reading your review, it wouldn't let me so... Hope I'm correct.
| Title: Just Harry
| 20 Jul 2011 7:37 pm
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| Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous)
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I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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